| #1 luae42[100586] |
| 64-60-21-42-cust.telepacific.net |
| Hi. First, BTW. |
| #2 someone[100587] |
| sc-66-27-186-137.socal.rr.com |
| 2nd lol wtf anathema as command ship LOL |
| #3 Star134[100588] |
| spider-wa052.proxy.aol.com |
| Nicely written, looking forward to more. |
| #4 [100589] |
| rm03-24-131-186-223.ce.mediaone.net |
| 4th... fuck you |
| #5 Shadow D'Arc[100590] |
| spider-to083.proxy.aol.com |
| 5th. Finally you posted this part. Not bad, but still, each part just feels too short |
| #6 Shadow D'arc[100591] |
| spider-to083.proxy.aol.com |
Damn tab key. Anyway, too short, but I like it. Keep up the good work, and fux0ring post more at a time! T_Mac is gay.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #7 WarLeaderJustin[100592] |
| adsl-64-166-109-11.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
| There's an Insurrection in my pants, and only a Brood War can bring it down. |
| #8 Jin Kazebari[100594] |
| 61.165.116.134 |
Weee. Good Job Man. Only problem I had were grammar (damn those commas) and confusion. Did the zerglings purposely attack that general under Mengsk's orders, or did they suddenly flail out of control?
The battleship part seemed short. I wanna see crusiers' names in italic, and some tactical thought too. It just seems really weird that crusiers would just sight and shoot, if you get my drift.
___________________________
"Captain, do you see that big gray thingy?"
"Umm...no."
"That one over there."
"Which one?"
"The third from the left."
"Which way is left?"
"Ok, see that big, floating mass of transparisteel which is sorta shaped like a T?"
"Oh, that one?"
"Yes, that one."
"What do you want?"
"Shoot it with our turbolasers!"
"Yes sir! Uh, sir?"
"Hmm?"
"How do I shoot turbolasers?"
Jin Kazebari |
| #9 (...Blaze...)[100595] |
| mp-217-231-130.daxnet.no |
| I agree on whats been said before, it is a good idea, but it feels trown around, like suddenly you are there and then you are a completely different place 2 seconds after. A little more time on each part, right now it seems a bit rushed. |
| #10 Eradicate~Me[100599] |
| pa-millscreek2a-123.buf.adelphia.net |
| plz dont ever mention ana again |
| #11 Drintr[100604] |
| 154.dsl7833.surewest.net |
The writing was for the most part good. There were a few minor grammar errors, but nothing major. For your next battlereport I would suggest something a bit longer and better edited. Good luck on your next BR.
6-7
Peace and Love,
Drintr |
| #12 Zorglub[100607] |
| 195.24.2.170 |
| I will ask here cause i dont know where else to ask: does anyone remember a battlereport with a guy who wrote about big flying farting bananas (Carriers) and such?...if you do who wrote it or what was i called...I would like to read it again thx! |
| #13 WarLeaderJustin[100608] |
| adsl-64-171-76-12.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
| But ana hates you.. |
| #14 Shadow D'Arc[100609] |
| spider-mtc-tb023.proxy.aol.com |
Blaze, when is the next part in your best of seven comin? Tired of waiting. And whoever keeps trying to ban me, I have 5 billion access numbers, and each one seems to have a different IP, so ha. T_Mac is gay.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #15 :+:SlipKnoT:+:[100640] |
| bc-van-mut-a53-12-83.look.ca |
| Arrr whats My Ip todday~~~ |
| #16 SarcasticSage[100667] |
| 207.157.58.61 |
Kudos i was in this report, it deserves a ten for this :D w00t! Your all owned by the mighty leader of protoss :P
-Sage :D
P.S. Monty you still own as a fan fic, gw and keep making more more more! |
| #17 Ana[100832] |
| bac16g13.inre.asu.edu |
| witless fuck |
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