| #1 Shadow D'Arc[103210] |
| spider-wn051.proxy.aol.com |
| 1st! WOOT! |
| #2 Shadow D'Arc[103212] |
| spider-wn051.proxy.aol.com |
Better than some Fan-Fic, but WAY too short. You split up people talking, which was good(Bad Monty Bad). Yes, if you know how to work Flash, you can use it. As far as the black background, you have to use Tables. Don't ask me how since I know $%$# about HTML, but try the HTML guides here. Good try tho.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #3 [SM]Strega~F[103213] |
| proxy2.senet.com.au |
<table bgcolor="black"><tr><td><font color="white"> etc etc.
DAMN YOU SHADOW!! Give me my damn 1st!
=(((((
Strega |
| #4 Koh_Leifoh[103215] |
| 24.76.216.150 |
| Yeah thanks, but now that I know that we can use Flash.... Oh boy. I've spent a year and a half with the program, and I can do some crazy shit. Expect some interesting reports from me very soon. First I'll redo The Alliance Chapter One in Flash, and it will have some little animations. It'll be wicked. And cause I know you'll all love it... I'll make Chapter 2 and so on... |
| #5 Shadow D'Arc[103220] |
| spider-wn084.proxy.aol.com |
Sorry Strega, I just got here first. And you can't say I didn't read it, cuz I was also #2, First-to-read, heh. Thx for the Table HTML. Flash is good if the right people use it.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #6 BOBBY357[103242] |
| spider-tl053.proxy.aol.com |
just when i thought it was safe to go back on this site...
FANFICS! |
| #7 CaughtNaked[103248] |
| 205-222-90-182.mcps.k12.md.us |
| not bad, i dont really like fan fics but this was alright. It was well written and no typos for a change. Make it longer in the future though, i liked the pictures but some more would be nice. Also, <td bgcolor="black"> :} Read my guide ppls! :} |
| #8 Nuggin[103253] |
| spider-wm081.proxy.aol.com |
this is my first comment
Hi everybody!!!!!!!! |
| #9 BigD[103255] |
| pc51.hum2.lab.acs.ucalgary.ca |
| Ever heard of overlords? |
| #10 metis[103264] |
| host213-123-40-100.dialup.lineone.co.uk |
| is gud, do more, write longer, make better arguments. but def do more chapts. |
| #11 fatty[103314] |
| 193.10.32.5 |
| Good writing, ceep'em comming... |
#12 [103392] |
| 206.214.215.192 |
| Too short. Save your next installment and publish it with the next three after that. |
#13 [103393] |
| 206.214.215.192 |
| We don't allow reports that are only links to another site BTW. |
| #14 Koh[103404] |
| 24.83.149.186 |
| Well maybe your site should be Flash compatible then. That's the only reason for the like. |
| #15 Koh_Leifoh[103425] |
| vance002.net.gov.bc.ca |
| Chapter 2 has been done for a while and I stayed up to 1am last night working on Chapter 3, and it's almost done. I'll have to release them in html since Mark won't let me have links in my report! I'll most likely release them today, or at the latest, tomorrow. |
| #16 livingexception[103745] |
| spider-wk021.proxy.aol.com |
Obviously short, but that also kinda came from lack of narration. Biggest question on my mind: Who is dale? If h's this dude's best buddy than a much better narration at the lunch scene is in order. Other than that, it flows well, bestows good mental pictures; I honestly think that a 4 is rather harsh, even with the length. Mas por favor, Koh.
le |
| #17 |]agomar[105116] |
| St-Catherines-ppp112540.sympatico.ca |
| You stole my title. I give u a 1. I forgot my tag combo thingie, o well. |
| #18 Koh[105434] |
| h24-76-216-150.va.shawcable.net |
| Fuck you, you piece of shit. I didn't know about your gay fic. I've only been here for a month, ya geek. Actually, about a week when I titled it. |
| #19 elvish_warrior[134142] |
| 193.15.223.188 |
| I was very insulted when u said that a hydralisk (or whatever zerg unit u said it was) was 10 times smarter than any protoss. *sniff* :( |