| #1 Blindside[103795] |
| ci31571-a.nash1.tn.home.com |
| I meant to put 2zv2p woops |
| #2 Sovereignty[103796] |
| wwck1UBR1-6-hfc-0251-40e81298.rdc1.ct.coxatwork.com |
| 1st stealer :( Anywho, get someone to proofread it next time. Kinda short. 4 |
| #3 John[103797] |
| adsl-63-206-93-251.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| 3rd! |
| #4 John[103798] |
| adsl-63-206-93-251.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| it was ok I'd say 4-5 |
| #5 Mistears[103799] |
| sc-66-27-182-55.socal.rr.com |
Bear with me here, this is my frist BR.
FRIST? THNX GW GG NO REE F00 |
| #6 B.R.This[103804] |
| dialup-64.159.114.52.Dial1.Portland1.Level3.net |
Good for a first try! More Paragraphs thou would be thanks..
Also color code the ppl who are playing. Makes it easyier to follow, and if you know how throw in some pics.
4-5 |
| #7 LuckyNewbie:P[103805] |
| dialup-209.245.12.252.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
Use fileread. Its a pain in the ass, but at least you can fix your mistakes. (2z vs 2t)
Still reading... |
| #8 Blindside[103808] |
| ci31571-a.nash1.tn.home.com |
| yeah it was short but the game was only like a little under 20 mins. |
| #9 ChessShark[103813] |
| we-24-127-94-106.we.mediaone.net |
| Good BR, short but pretty good writing. Id say about a 5. |
| #10 |||l||||ll|||||[103823] |
| cdm-66-6-49-tylr.cox-internet.com |
chess shark, i'd be careful about being critical of other brs for a bit, seeing as how you just wrote one and it isnt particularly great
and half the BR was build orders for BLOOD BATH for christs sake
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| #11 Twip[103825] |
| port-40.gall-ts2.cloh.net |
Not really great.. if you'd released it within a few months after this site began, you'd have gotten around a 7.
Be more descriptive, and use a game that's actually interesting (i.e. close, difficult, etc... not a bulldozing of some newbie). |
| #12 BOBBY357[103837] |
| spider-wb061.proxy.aol.com |
| dont take first comment thx. 4-5. |
| #13 NotDefault[103861] |
| h24-83-95-176.vs.shawcable.net |
The biggest problem I saw with it is that you stated multiple times near the beginning, that "Bene looked dead." This made it obvious that you would win. This was reinforced even more when it became a 2v1 - glossing over the details is a good idea once the outcome becomes certain, to spare the reader from boredom.
NotDefault |
| #14 Zerohour[103905] |
| 207.234.66.180 |
| nice b.r. i think that Bene was the best out there, he didnt give up and ended up winning, hes my hero. |
#15  [103915] |
| user118.net128.va.sprint-hsd.net |
your writing had a number of really atrocious mistakes. you ran on sentences repeatedly and i found it difficult to follow the action of the report.
your formatting was very appealing, but the game was pretty bad too. canonning newbies are not something u want in a BR. next tiem get some better opposition or obs some better players' games
4 |
| #16 Killah![103951] |
| gateway.providentnj.com |
| If a n00b writes a BR and noone is around to read it does it still suck? |
| #17 ZeroHour[103955] |
| 207.234.66.43 |
| no killah but your mom does |
| #18 Killah![103979] |
| gateway.providentnj.com |
| why is it always the unknowns that flame me? |
| #19 ZeroHour[104059] |
| 207.234.66.35 |
Who the hell are you? Ive never heard of you. You have no Brs so shut your fugly face ok, until you make a better br than this or why dont you suckit like your momma, and wipe it off your chin because I own you.
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| #20 TeF)PoWeR[148270] |
| p-uwmadison-out-2.wiscnet.net |
omfg you guys are newbs.... me and my partner could rape u front and back!!! go home you newb!!! msg me, ill be on TeF)PoWeR and ill probly be in channel TeF-
/)__/) <---- TeF- Bunny Owns J00
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