| #1 katome[107271] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
| cool :) (Don't post right after me draws attention from my report ><;) Text had no noticeable mistakes, a little sparse in places but thats just me. Less pics! Fancy graphics make me look bad :( (translation: pics were good ^^) and the font in the pics I thought was ugly, but again just me. I'd say easy 8 :) |
| #2 Arsenic[107272] |
| sdn-ar-002nmalbuP044.dialsprint.net |
| thanks Katome, i just finished reading your report :) Very good and I like this smiley :] |
| #3 Sovereignty[107273] |
| wwck1UBR1-6-hfc-0251-40e81298.rdc1.ct.coxatwork.com |
| Nice. The font is too small though. Good pics. Very good for a 1st report. Keep it up. |
| #4 katome[107276] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
| I think I should get a prize for being the first person to take 1st comment and actually comment, as opposed to just saying '1st!' :] (<---gosu smiley ^^) |
| #5 retardboy[107294] |
| px2cv.gv.shawcable.net |
| Excellent first time report. I'd give it 8 for the report but the game wasn't the greatest so 7. |
| #6 Furious[107295] |
| bal-ts1-2500.tpgi.com.au |
Great Work!!
Adobe Photoshop?
This is one of the best reports in a while and I enjoyed it, more pls! |
| #7 |||l||||ll||||| has 7th comment[107299] |
| cdm-66-6-191-tylr.cox-internet.com |
"and their off"
what a great way to start off, it just reeks with sophistication and intelligence and THE ABILITY TO FUCKING USE THE RIGHT WORD
small font, very annoying.... and the game wasnt very good
5-6 |
| #8 Arsenic[107302] |
| sdn-ar-002nmalbuP044.dialsprint.net |
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| #9 Yoyo[107303] |
| ppp-208-188-16-143.dialup.rcsntx.swbell.net |
Awesome report. Great for your first report, I'm astonished. Looked like an interesting game too, I wish I could've seen it. Very good use of the right words and great SS graphics.
Keep it up and I look forward to reading more of your work. |
| #10 Arsenic[107304] |
| sdn-ar-002nmalbuP044.dialsprint.net |
i guess every writer has to post some sort of 'follow up' usually containing: "thanks for all the great criticism guys, im working on another report and it should be out shortly!" so with that in mind...
thanks for all the great criticism guys, im working on another report and it should be out shortly! |
| #11 Tanks-A-Lot[107307] |
| ts1-31.turtlelake.spacestar.net |
| Well, using the right words is good stuff, BUT you referred to the SCV's as "drones" a couple of times. That and I needed a magnifying glass to see the font :P 8.5 |
| #12 GoZuLu[107309] |
| 195.249.56.3 |
Not bad, not bad at all ....
7 is ok, so learn, and keep posting.
GoZuLu - TheOldDane |
| #13 [SM]Strega~F[107313] |
| proxy4.senet.com.au |
Hmm, I didn't notice the "And their off" mistake. GW Fence.
Strega |
| #14 ()^.^()[107314] |
| gateway.dprcssb.edu.on.ca |
well mr #11 you should be ashamed , he refered to them as
*Ahem*
" a handful of drones '"
so bah !!!
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| #15 ~Fenix~[107323] |
| bess-proxy.wiu.k12.pa.us |
just call em peons, its good for all
upgraded speedlots own terran so bad |
| #16 KepowOb[107328] |
| HSE-Montreal-ppp3469838.sympatico.ca |
I liked it. Good for a first BR.
One thing about the pictures, some of them didn't really show much. In one of you pictures you see some tanks and vultures laying mines, and in the corner you can see half a tank with psi-storm on it...
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| #17 BigD[107336] |
| px2so.cg.shawcable.net |
Finally, people learn to read the guides before they submit their first reports. GW. Font was small, I can't believe the terran guy didn't win-he had him right where he wanted him and he still lost.
7.0 |
| #18 stonecoldnewbie[107344] |
| 24.245.64.22 |
| gj,keep posting etc etc 7 |
| #19 ZerG~LinG[107345] |
| p407-040.ppp.get2net.dk |
Great first report, it owned my first br for sure ;) Well i only had paint by then anyways.
I gotta get photoshop :P
The report: Text was way too small, and doesn't excatly invite you to begin reading :O
Pics were pure ownage, good humor as well :D
7, maybe 7.5 :O
Z~LinG |
| #20 Peon[107364] |
| dt060n9e.tampabay.rr.com |
| Nice pics and good report overall. Your report owned mine. =( u gotta teach me how to do that good plz. =P |
| #21 Manius[107367] |
| adsl-81-167-121.asm.bellsouth.net |
| Well...I liked the font size. =D Pics owned for a first report, and I enjoyed the battle. My rating? I give it a 9. What's my rating worth? Absolutely...nothing. GJ, keep 'em coming. |
| #22 retardboy[107381] |
| h24-66-143-108.gv.shawcable.net |
| If you don't like the font size you can just increase it using your web browser. |
| #23 derek[107383] |
| AC981384.ipt.aol.com |
i kinda liked it, i think it could have been an 8 with cleaner grammar, but nontheless an enjoyable read
and if you have to even MENTION the small font size, you're a motherfucking dunce...i liked it how it was and you can just make it bigger if you're uncomfortable with it |
| #24 Zeratul[107384] |
| sdn-ar-005nynyorP257.dialsprint.net |
nice report and an especially good one for a 1st, keep up the good work :) 7.5
for those of you who are complaining of the small text size, you can always change it by holding control and moving the mouse wheel; or from the menu you can go to view and text size. however that's only if you use IE, i don't know about netscape. it probably has an option also. |
| #25 Arsenic[107385] |
| sdn-ar-001nmalbuP008.dialsprint.net |
hey all--sorry abut the rediculously small font size, i dont know what happened, i had it set at "12 verdana". Also some of the pictures covered some text, again sorrry bout that, i dont know what went wrong.
Arsenic |
| #26 Shadow D'Arc[107400] |
| spider-mtc-tj013.proxy.aol.com |
Screen resolution effects font size. I run 800 X 600, and it showed fine. Maybe its the 1200 X 900 or whatever size you guys use.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #27 Amoeba_Boy[107423] |
| spider-tm061.proxy.aol.com |
hehehe, papa smurf
@@@:-)
its marge simpson |
| #28 OK so[107425] |
| host-216-77-212-89.fll.bellsouth.net |
I stopped reading this after i saw "And their off"
The first fuckup, and a very annoying one.. at the friggin begining ! |
| #29 Clockw0rk.v13[107432] |
| 64-66-209-7.stkn.pacific.net |
Gw arsenic very nice, now I know why you do gosu updates
on the site to ^^ Arsenic where u been lately havent seen ya on, ok well msg me when u get on i b in clan channle.
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| #30 0c00l[107433] |
| regncache3.sasknet.sk.ca |
| woah sexy battle report ^__________^ |
| #31 >:][107434] |
| a3hb345ry2pa.bc.hsia.telus.net |
Nick, wtf was with that font. Smooth report.
Cya
PS: Seans gay
PSS: sos that indian guy who made fun of me
PSSS: Seans gay |
| #32 Smurfin~~~nC[107435] |
| ppp-208-188-22-238.dialup.rcsntx.swbell.net |
| Nice report arsenic. I liked the "and their off" start and I viewed the site in 800x600 which showed the font clearly and easy to read. Good choice of words, graphics, and good game. Hope to see more of your reports in the future! |
| #33 Test[107446] |
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<font color=green>test</font>
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| #34 Prodigy-yes-thatprodigy[107452] |
| adsl-64-172-197-208.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
| For a first report is was good, small and annoying font. and you didnt exactly use photoshop to its fullest. anyways, gl on west, say hi to cheol and kill paul as soon as you can. play me on rtcw. and i dont play bw anymore cause im too cheap to buy a 5 dollar game for the cd key. i lost mine T_T.... o and hmmm...... next time, use flash /w photoshop... its professional |
| #35 IcE-Inforcer[107454] |
| proxy.sj3.marketscore.com |
| Nice work, and by the way, all you fags should stop complaining about the br, i'd like to c you guys do that. Gj Arsenic. Im lookin forward 2 ur next one. |
| #36 Tavernology[107483] |
| proxy7.senet.com.au |
Pretty damn good. As for the font size, it was fine. As for the pics, great work, and as for how many to put in, that depends on personal opinion. People with shitty modems don't like lotsa pics, people with cable don't care.
8 IMO |
| #37 ~ViLaToR~[107486] |
| 24.27.228.60.wintersprings-ubr-a.cfl.rr.com |
This should have been higher than a 7
good stuff and make more |
| #38 BlueRedYellow[107487] |
| 12-248-92-174.client.attbi.com |
dropship.v13 shoulda won =[
why dropship? terran best ;o
korea~ |
#39  [107530] |
| ct91955-a.richmnd1.in.home.com |
hmm, okay for a first report. Work on your picture formatting cuz that is just wacked up. Pick better games, work on lackluster writing, and make the text size a bit bigger.
6 |
| #40 Clockw0rk[107543] |
| 64-66-209-18.stkn.pacific.net |
Drefsab chill out it was his 1st and your already harassing him, the report view just fine for me and i think it should have gotten at least an 8.
Neo and Drop and dead sexy.
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| #41 Arsenic[107567] |
| sdn-ar-003nmalbuP264.dialsprint.net |
| well there seems to be something wacked out with the report and the way it is viewed. I did a little experiment and reloaded the page 10 times. Around 6 of the times it worked perfect and 4 of the times it made the font very small and overlapped the pictures. I dont know why... |
| #42 Shadow D'Arc[107568] |
| spider-wa011.proxy.aol.com |
Ur comp=Evil, Arsenic. I must have had the 60% chance of it showing properly the 1 time I read it. I'd say resubmit trying to fix the problem, but repost=ghey, and if it at least works part of the time, 2 hell with it.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #43 LuckyNewbie:P[107593] |
| dialup-63.211.242.1.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
| spam |
| #44 LuckyNewbie:P[107594] |
| dialup-63.211.242.1.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
46th comment on the 4600th report
i own |
| #45 katome[107607] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
| I always get small font but pics are always fine, wierd. |
| #46 LoseAlot.v13[107618] |
| cpe-24-221-185-145.ca.sprintbbd.net |
| ars GW great job, u own ^_^ all these fags are gay |
| #47 PopulaR.v13[107666] |
| adsl-64-165-225-124.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
"what a great way to start off, it just reeks with sophistication <b>and intelligence <b>and THE ABILITY TO FUCKING USE THE RIGHT WORD"
That's a run-on sentence, retard. Tsk, tsk. Anyway, Ars, I thought it was a great report. Keep up the good work. ;0 |
| #48 Arsenic[107751] |
| sdn-ar-001nmalbuP211.dialsprint.net |
omfg...paul...your really alive?
thx for the comments :) |
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