| #1 Mep[109486] |
| user-2inimtg.dialup.mindspring.com |
Writing fan fics is much more fun the reading them. Sorry if it was too short, this is just a test to see if I'm a halfway decent writer, and if you'd rather have me write more or be banned.
Oh, and 1st. ;) |
| #2 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[109487] |
| h000a277d260a.ne.mediaone.net |
gay
1
2nd |
| #3 znzf[109488] |
| CS447249-A.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
unreadable/bad type of font style
too short
no flashy title so expected of fanfics
BAN
j/k. try harder? haha.. |
| #4 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[109489] |
| h000a277d260a.ne.mediaone.net |
gay
1
4th |
| #5 Mep[109493] |
| user-2inimtg.dialup.mindspring.com |
Wow TIME, beings as I respect your opinion *so* much, I think I will go run onto the forums, make up a stupid nickname for you (while calling you gay at the same time, how mature) and spam for three weeks about how much of a loser you are. Then I will make a halfway decent br, then complain about its rating. *Then* I will do a shitty "revenge battlereport" in which me and my friends will take cheap potshots on you. Then, I shall get one of my friends to make the name TlMe is not on YOUR SlDE on b.net and have him suck terribly in a reply just to prove how much of a better man I am then you.
To sum it up, I'm mentally scared by your horrid distaste for me, yet I do believe I will hang around you for another month.
Have a nice day. |
| #6 [109495] |
| dsl092-169-187.wdc1.dsl.speakeasy.net |
B
A
D |
| #7 Dragonsven[109496] |
| s0.dial1.pro.nac.net |
It seems my brother Forever_Knight has started a slew of fan fics at this site. I don't know whether he should feel important or just evil. Only thing wrong: bigger font. Good report.
-Sven |
| #8 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[109518] |
| h000a277d260a.ne.mediaone.net |
gay
1
8th |
| #9 Shadow D'Arc[109538] |
| spider-wo044.proxy.aol.com |
What Sven said. The tone of the first and last paragraphs is the same tone I write in.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #10 Patton1944[109543] |
| spider-tq013.proxy.aol.com |
| Pretty good. I espescially like the part the electricity went into his "Brian". |
| #11 NotDefault[109545] |
| 24.83.95.176 |
I didn't find it bad, despite what everybody else says. The first paragraph was especially good - it had focus, and kept the focus, while introducing the mood for the rest of the story. Sure it wasn't something remarkable but I think you have potential. I hate fan-fictions as a rule normally, but I'm willing to make exceptions for those that are short and have a pleasant writing style. One thing I would change is to crop down the middle a little... it's kind of odd going into all that detail when it isn't really needed.
NotDefault |
| #12 Ezikel[109562] |
| 212.219.117.187 |
| Its not great, (personnaly i didnt mind the font at all) but its not "bad" or "Gay" but then the type of people who go around saying "fanfics suck" are type of people who dont understand what foreplay is and only ever watch action films, and watch them because they have big bangs, and they fail to see the story. Oh look... only Time said it was Gay |
| #13 Ling-erie[109570] |
| proxy3.leeds.ac.uk |
I hate fan-fics
but mep is thx.
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| #14 CaughtNaked[109596] |
| pcp831326pcs.nrockv01.md.comcast.net |
| 10 |
| #15 Manius[109614] |
| adsl-81-164-106.asm.bellsouth.net |
| Mep. One thing you will learn to do at this site, is to ignore insignificant, uneducated bastards like TIME. Keep going man. Just remember: Someone likes your writing. So they'll read it. And if 99% of the site doesn't like what you write, well, they don't have to read it. And...do me a favor...and just ignore TIME. He's..."gay". |
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