| #1 Puma[110532] |
| e2h2p24.scotland.net |
1st
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| #2 Mr.Mediocre[110535] |
| 149.149.205.38 |
Nice first report man. The things I would improve mostly have to do with your writing. First of all, slow down. Re-read your report after youre done, then re-read it again. After that, re-read it. Theres no excuse for having a million grammar errors and inconsistencies in your report. Your writing will improve DRAMATICALLY once you start revising your report, correcting spelling errors, and improving the flow the report.
Tip on pics. When doing a real BR, be sure to only use pics that actually mean something to the battle you're describing. They should be used to help the reader understand whats going on, not just be there for the heck of it.
I look forward to your next report. If you need any help with anything, don't be afraid to ask about it in the forums, there are lots of people willing to help out. :D
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| #3 DivvyO[110536] |
| kpcrdc.kp.org |
"Never play 2 members of a clan in a FFA, they will just double rush you!!!! (DOH!)"
I saw very little rushing and/or doubling in this report ;/ |
| #4 Manius[110538] |
| adsl-81-166-235.asm.bellsouth.net |
4th. Nice first report.
4-5 |
| #5 DrunkenGoliath[110544] |
| bjg8348uy15mf.ab.hsia.telus.net |
#5!!
Gonna go read it now, as I love all text reports. They own :] |
| #6 Ender[110549] |
| bgp565199bgs.eatntn01.nj.comcast.net |
| 6th!! |
| #7 Amoeba_Boy[110554] |
| spider-tf012.proxy.aol.com |
Nice report
I love blood bath when it doesn't end in a rush cuz you have to spend your resources wisely with no real expansion sites |
| #8 ZerG~LinG[110555] |
| p432-033.ppp.get2net.dk |
Wow, i got 7th!
Practice, Practice and sex.
Oh, and whatever mediocre said ;) |
| #9 Amoeba_Boy[110557] |
| spider-tf012.proxy.aol.com |
| Don't you just hate when you get there, but someone can type faster then you |
| #10 Sovereignty[110605] |
| wsip68-15-45-159.ri.ri.cox.net |
| Nice first report. It hurts me when people say defence though. It's defense! :) |
| #11 BloodFists[110606] |
| ip68-5-77-74.oc.oc.cox.net |
| actually defence is an alternate spelling of defense |
#12  [110624] |
| ct91955-a.richmnd1.in.home.com |
| hmmm |
| #13 n00B[110651] |
| adsl-63-200-50-241.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| watz cloning and how do u do it? |
| #14 Puma[110761] |
| e2h3p115.scotland.net |
Thanks for the comments guys, just a quick note... The spelling is British.
Thanks
~Puma~ |
| #15 PunkaZoid[110819] |
| webcacheB03a.cache.pol.co.uk |
Okies review m8, but for a start, ure asking to be rushed by at least 1 opponent on bb, and 2 is mad.
id early bunkz, then riner drop, but im a terran man thru and thru.
try and mention the other playaz a bit more in ure review aswell, write more in first person beta read :-) |
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