| #1 Keanu_Reaver[110782] |
| max01-dynamic-64-65-141-160.sea.eschelon.com |
| well, it took me a while to post this part of my story :( but with the compusa tourney and hanging out with friends even my weekend has been pretty busy, but i managed to get it out anyway, tell me what you all think! :D |
| #2 Amoeba_Boy[110785] |
| spider-tm071.proxy.aol.com |
1st non-author
woot woot |
| #3 CaughtNaked[110788] |
| pcp831326pcs.nrockv01.md.comcast.net |
| 3rd, to busy to read though |
| #4 Amoeba_Boy[110790] |
| spider-tm071.proxy.aol.com |
| Gj, but make it a bit longer |
| #5 SiG.[110794] |
| host-216-77-217-152.fll.bellsouth.net |
WHEE I waited fer this one, and you didn't let me down man!
Gj, lookin forward to the next part!
I cant wait to see my tanks fuck up some toss!
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| #6 badtz maru[110797] |
| pcp108471pcs.echryh01.nj.comcast.net |
| no. |
| #7 ktimekiller[110801] |
| ip68-4-244-74.oc.oc.cox.net |
how come ppl hate MY fictions?
is it because of my text color?
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| #8 triped[110805] |
| 63.85.132.17 |
| I'm so fucking tired of fanfics being posted here, no matter how good they are. (and this isn't that good) |
| #9 CKane[110809] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
"the anvil and the hammer" reminds me of the inner ear.
does this story involve a stirrup? |
| #10 Patton1944[110810] |
| spider-tf014.proxy.aol.com |
| Gj. Make more or d13. |
| #11 CKane[110811] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
When I saw the word "battle's", i stopped reading, because it takes a big idiot to put an apostraphe in a plural word.
but when I scrolled down to click the comment section button, I caught this gem:
'"A terran force has attacked my camp! They have pillaged everything!" Zeltior said with hate in his eye's.'
well, gee, someone NEEDS TO LEARN TO SPELL
IF YOU CAN'T SPELL, DON'T TYPE |
| #12 stardust8297[110814] |
| sdn-ar-001casfrMP101.dialsprint.net |
| well i liked this part of the story; it had action and it advanced the plot as well =P it was extremely well written, just like the rest hehe. the battle was a little hard to follow, but i think that's probably just me cause i read it when i just woke up =/ other than that i really enjoyed this one =) *sigh* except you're killin me here with all these cliff hangers! can't wait for the next part =P |
| #13 |]agomar[110815] |
| Ottawa-ppp3517251.sympatico.ca |
CKane, that was perhaps one of the more idiotic comments I have ever read.
Regardless, I liked this fanfic, and I'm gonna slap it another 7 ;). Probably a little lower cause I didnt like the title . . . hammer and an anvil are far too similar to have them included in a title like that :O. GW! |
| #14 real[110818] |
| 059.b.010.mel.iprimus.net.au |
I _really_ like this series keanu_reaver, dont listen to the fools saying 'blah blah fanfic suxxr0 im gh3y!!1!'.
Your writing style is very remarkable keanu, and you always have a clever twist at the end to keep us reading. :o
BTW CKane, when you see his name you must realise its going to be fanfic by now. Stop crying please ? |
| #15 BigD[110822] |
| px2so.cg.shawcable.net |
| This is how you do fanfics. Good writing, and pleasing to the eye. GW |
| #16 CKane[110840] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
| um, no, i'm not reading something that has a grammar error every time it has a plural |
| #17 #14 shut up[110847] |
| nic-245-c64-22.mn.mediaone.net |
and triped me too
this isnt scfanfics.com =[ too many, good or bad |
| #18 Keanu_Reaver[110849] |
| max01-dynamic-64-65-141-242.sea.eschelon.com |
if you dont like fan fics then skip over mine, i think its pretty obvious im doing nothing but fan fics for the time being
and despite popular opinion (CKane) its actually very difficult to have a report with no grammatical errors what so ever, i apologize |
| #19 CKane[110900] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
praetor's fanfics were 12 chapters of "I ordered the guys to attack the other guys"
not very interesting writing |
| #20 Twip[110921] |
| 0-1pool194-93.nas5.columbus1.oh.us.da.qwest.net |
Wow CKane, I love your rant about misspellers.
*cough* APOSTRAPHE *cough* |
| #21 UltimateFire[110929] |
| cache-mtc-ak06.proxy.aol.com |
Good stuff keanu, this is better than most fanfics ive read. Only thing i dont like too much is the way you portray the protoss...other fanfics ive read have had them using only telepathy, and they spoke with weird symbols instead of quotes. Here they appear much more, well, human. Heh, and please no more stupid grammar comments, I had to correct 6 spelling errors already, so i can imagine how hard it is writing a whole report =. Keep up the good work man.
"Duff Man can't breathe!! Oh no!!!" |
| #22 hoobawhaaaa??[118322] |
| sdn-ar-019casfrMP201.dialsprint.net |
| i will dedicate and sacrifice my everything for just a seconds' worth from my story's ending and i just wish that i could know if the directions that i take and all the choices that i make will never fall from nothing show me what it's for make me understand it i've been crawling in the dark looking for the answer is there something more than what i've been handed i've been crawling in the dark looking for the answer |
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