| #1 Redemption6[114082] |
| cache-1.sbo.ma.webcache.rcn.net |
| Took damn well long enough. Please delete my last 3 "failed" brs. Okay a few things, i cant find the preview so i cant do a preview. Geocities and battlereports.com are different because on geocities my report worked. That being said if you think this battlereport is crap so be it. I worked kinda hard and i enjoyed making it. Post all the comments you want. Thanx CHJ for helping me post this thing. I just copied the source from your edited one and posted it on the submit form. thx a lot. |
| #2 CrackHeadJeb[114083] |
| mu-197049.dhcp.missouri.edu |
Okay, just making sure of one last thing. You fileread from your account, right?
(making sure before I delete the one on my account)
btw, first
-CHJ |
| #3 CrackHeadJeb[114085] |
| mu-197049.dhcp.missouri.edu |
| oh, okay, np. The help docs are sorta antiquated, glad I could help. |
| #4 Redemption6[114086] |
| cache-1.sbo.ma.webcache.rcn.net |
| You can delete it, i have the page stored. Thx for ur help. And no i was first :D but itz all good. Sorry as hell for spamming br.com. You ppl can go and hang me if u want. |
| #5 CrackHeadJeb[114087] |
| mu-197049.dhcp.missouri.edu |
bah, new report submitters go through this all of the time, I should make a guide or something
-CHJ |
| #6 Adrenaling[114090] |
| CPE002078e0f4b2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| rofl. 4 posts in a row. =] |
| #7 KepowOb[114091] |
| HSE-Montreal-ppp3467924.sympatico.ca |
lol, "All the pictures are about 200k so just sit back and relax if u have dialup." In the BR I'm working on now, I have over 3mb of pics :.
Anyway, the font colour got to me for some reason. Yellow over black BG has never bothered me before, but this time it really got to me, so I didn't finnish reading it. From what I read it seemed pretty good except you keep saying that everything you do is dumb and it got a little annoying. Also, at the start it looked like you were just trying to copy good BRs, mind you this is always a good idea, you need to add your own personal touch too. Except for the quad post, its pretty good for a first BR, and I will finnish it later tonight.
hehe, a guild to submitting a report :] |
| #8 Adrenaling[114092] |
| CPE002078e0f4b2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
hi. im back. nice report. was it your first? if it was it was pretty good. =]
and CHJ, make a guide plz. =] |
| #9 AbsoluteGeneus[114093] |
| spider-mtc-tf052.proxy.aol.com |
Yea..andstuff. Good report, good prospect for a gold. :)
Make a guide CHJ so I can use it cuz ima bit on the slow side. Thankyouhavefun. |
| #10 Sliced Bread[114097] |
| spider-tl051.proxy.aol.com |
I liked it. Very good for your first. For me, it showed up as white on black, but I'm using AOL on a mac, so...
gj 7 |
| #11 Redemption6[114098] |
| lexingtont160.l.subnet.rcn.net |
| Thx its my first real battle report. Ive written fanfics with no use of html whatsoever so it doesnt matter. I dont get why u dont like yellow on black? I believe the report was a shade of blue (that looked like white) on black and i only used yellow in the beginning. O well. I dunno why it showed up weird on ur mac cuz im on a school one right now (those cool blue imacs, not the new white ones :() and it shows up alright. Thx for the comments. CHJ should definitly make a guide so he can help poor souls like me. |
| #12 ImperatorP[114099] |
| h002078ccd7eb.ne.client2.attbi.com |
good job!
I also saw it as white on black by the way(IE 5 on a Mac) |
| #13 Adrenaling[114100] |
| CPE002078e0f4b2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| btw, preview it first to see if it works. |
| #14 UltimateFire[114101] |
| spider-ntc-tb063.proxy.aol.com |
CHJ make a guide!! I need one because I have no HTML skills and I want to report a ffa I played that was good =[
I liked this report. It was good. Make more. |
| #15 KepowOb[114102] |
| HSE-Montreal-ppp3467924.sympatico.ca |
For me the text all shows up as yellow, but wait, I'm in netscape. Just checked it out in IE (which I only use to read brs and not much else cause it hates me) and it has that nice blue text. I have to remember that to stop using netscape for reading BRs one day, since it screws them all up.
Read it now, and I have to say its pretty good, possible gold. GW |
| #16 Sexy^Orangutang[114104] |
| 12-234-99-99.client.attbi.com |
this is decent enough for gold
gj |
| #17 Black_Abyss[114106] |
| 1Cust83.tnt36.lax3.da.uu.net |
| This is a very nice first BR, possible gold material. I will look forward to more of your BRs in the future :) |
| #18 TankEatingSCV[114107] |
| gso88-193-110.triad.rr.com |
| Nice battle report! Cool pics, funny writing, good game. Overall it was quite good. I wish I could have done that good on my first battle report. |
| #19 USTaliWhacker[114108] |
| cdm-66-140-232-bate.cox-internet.com |
Very good job for a first man. Keep up the good work. Definitely Gold material. I'll give it a 9. Would have given it a 10, but there were some glaring grammar issues that need addressed. Plus, towards the end you mentioned when he rushed you with those 30 zealots that he just destroyed ur Nexus?? I was like whaaaaa??? But overall, VERY GOOD br man. Much better than anything that I could hope to accomplish. Can't wait to see ur next one.
This is USTali signing off....... |
| #20 Redemption6[114110] |
| cache-1.sbo.ma.webcache.rcn.net |
Yea reading that over i found a few errors.
Few spelling errors and grammer here and there, i was kinda tired today.
I made CC and nexus confused a few times :)
I said that he had 25 lots left but later i said he had 30
dumb mistakes like that. |
| #21 Adrenaling[114111] |
| CPE002078e0f4b2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| i'd give gold, but 9 is just way too high for this kind of report. |
| #22 sl1pkn0t`]U[[114112] |
| s3a-185.olypen.com |
| I liked it. |
| #23 CrackHeadJeb[114113] |
| mu-197049.dhcp.missouri.edu |
Hrm. If it's all yellow in Netscape, it's probably a font tag that wasn't closed or something. Netscape is funny like that which is unfortunate because that's all Dagomar uses I think.
btw nice report title ^_^
-CHJ |
| #24 [114123] |
| ppp-206-170-33-194.okld03.pacbell.net |
| I didn't feel like reading it, but it looks good, and the opics are well done |
#25  [114125] |
| St-Catherines-ppp126505.sympatico.ca |
| Jolly nice report! I'm not sure about you being an expert, since you rather beautifully lost those goliaths, but, oh well :). There were a number of issues I had with the pictures, them being very small and very blurry, and not of any truly great scenes of action. The game was decent, but perhaps you didn't describe it as well as you could've. The part where you explain the building up pictures half to death was somewhat tedious as well. But, nevertheless, this was a good read and deserving of the 8 I'll give it. |
| #26 Joe.Smurf[114128] |
| x130-65-218-49.sjsu.edu |
DAg heh ,
"There were a number of issues I had with the pictures, them being very small and very blurry, and not of any truly great scenes of action. The game was decent, but perhaps you didn't describe it as well as you could've. The part where you explain the building up pictures half to death was somewhat tedious as well. "
I mean this is in no disrespect, really jsut wondering but how did u get an 8 out of all that ? :) ?
Good report man , one thing Capitalize I's please. :)
-joe |
| #27 Redemption6[114134] |
| cache-1.sbo.ma.webcache.rcn.net |
| and the reason the title was .....fuck was because if you saw this report in the early stages i had to post it 4 times to get it to work. The title at first was "A Cool Report- My first br" or something and it slowly went down to "A Cool-Report, does it work now", "delte my reports" and "...fuck" |
| #28 IcE-Inforcer[114141] |
| 209.105.210.34 |
Nice report, way better than my first. If it is your first.
I say 8-9 (no flash) |
| #29 ZerG~LinG[114143] |
| p424-037.ppp.get2net.dk |
Great first (real) report, text was nice and very funny :)
One thing about the text, when u wanna say 'expansion' don't contrapt it as EX, i had a nice laugh outta
"haha" i thought, now i could get revenge and take his ex."
What? U taking his old girlfriend or what???
heh.
Prolly just me thats fuxed :(
Pics were lacking, u got the build screen in the bottom in every SS, and the pics were far to small for me to actually get something from them.
Make more! keke!
and btw, ...fuck is a very nice title, yessir.
CHJ for rater/God |
| #30 IcE-Inforcer[114144] |
| 209.105.210.34 |
Now that I read it, I can make a better comment.
-Good work for first.
-A few spelling mistakes
-Pics weren't bad.
-Not long enough for higher mark.
-CHJ for rater.
-Game was good.
Make more, we need more peeps to make br's. |
| #31 Casper...[114145] |
| spc-isp-tor-58-20-508.sprint.ca |
use stylesheets. 10pt is way easier to read then 12pt.
google.com -- css+cascading+style+sheets
get a cracked photoshop or fireworks. |
| #32 Sovereignty[114147] |
| wsip68-15-45-159.ri.ri.cox.net |
| Hm. Good job, but next time don't cover so much of the pics with text. A lot of the time it blocked some of the decent action shots. |
| #33 Adrenaling[114149] |
| CPE002078e0f4b2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
erm... Ice, how did u know what rating u wanted to give him if u hadnt even read the report until after?
"Nice report, way better than my first. If it is your first.
I say 8-9 (no flash)"
then u say
"now that i read it..."
doesnt make sense to me. |
| #34 IcE-Inforcer[114159] |
| proxys.sjc.marketscore.com |
It's easy to give an overall rating if u just take a quick look at it, that's what I did. Then I read it later cuz I didn't have time earlier. Agmeh.
Thats why first comment wuz short.
:) |
| #35 [114171] |
| Ottawa-ppp3517205.sympatico.ca |
SHIT, I wrote up this big huge long thing right after Joe wrote his comment, then accidentily closed the window. What can I say, I was pulling an all nighter and it was 3 AM :P. 42 single spaced pages man, not right.
Anyway, I really really don't feel like typing it alll up again. Sorry. |
| #36 Spuzz[114177] |
| di250.opencominc.com |
Great work, I enjoyed your report a lot. Hope to see more from you.
Spuzz |
| #37 Twip[114178] |
| 0-1pool192-76.nas5.columbus1.oh.us.da.qwest.net |
It's cool that you pick up on things that quickly (HTML). I liked it. It's a great first.
Try to find pictures of real action in the future, if you plan to use pics. I know you had a replay of it, because of how it was implied in your BR, so I know you could've captured more of the battles. Also - why do you put 'z's at the ends of words? lol |
| #38 WarLeaderJustin[114183] |
| 63.113.115.5 |
| Good stuff. |
| #39 IcE-Inforcer[114186] |
| proxy.ia4.marketscore.com |
Twip man,
Z'z rockz and ownz all letterz.
Bahh... nevermind I'm going to bed... |
| #40 Joe.Smurf[114195] |
| x130-65-218-49.sjsu.edu |
Dag no worries dood, -_- your a dedicated rater I dont question your rating.
-joe |
| #41 CaughtNaked[114272] |
| waf-dc32-204.rasserver.net |
| 6? Ah well you tried and its not that bad. |
| #42 Marxist[114584] |
| 207.163.161.97 |
Nice format and writing, but it is not that good of a game.
Make a br with a good game next tijme... |
| #43 Redemption6[114728] |
| cache-1.sbo.ma.webcache.rcn.net |
| thx 4 comments, #44 i tried to get a good game, it was that or...BGH battlecruiser v carrier fite :D ...obviously i chose this |
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