| #1 UltimateFire[115506] |
| spider-ntc-td011.proxy.aol.com |
| HAHA first!! w00t! mad skill! |
| #2 UltimateFire[115508] |
| spider-ntc-td011.proxy.aol.com |
alright, sorry about that, I just got caught up in the moment.
*ahem* One thing I noticed that was fairly annoying was how you, when you were toss, kept making overlords. This confused me greatly, and I can only assume you meant Dragoons but instead put for some reason Overlords... This kind of threw off the rest of the report for me seeing as how I wasnt sure which units were what...but it's still a good report. I doubt if I were a rater that I'd give it a gold, but it's still good. |
| #3 Mistears[115513] |
| cpe-24-31-39-161.socal.rr.com |
lol yes to #2
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#4  [115518] |
| StCatherines-ppp109191.sympatico.ca |
| nother 6 from me ;). lol @ #2 |
| #5 DarkRider[115521] |
| 198.134.2.2 |
| I liked it except for the part about you making overloads |
| #6 IcE-Inforcer[115541] |
| 209.105.210.34 |
Another text only.
But writing isn't bad.
Add pics and go gold. |
| #7 Adrenaling[115550] |
| CPE002078e0f4b2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| haha, at least your consistent. 3 6's in a row. =O |
| #8 wynr[115554] |
| neptune.cohr.com |
| please make the players names different colors, to make it easier to follow. Oh, and cut the intro to about 2-3 sentances, not 4+ paragraphs. |
| #9 Redemption6[115559] |
| 209-6-250-32.c3-0.lex-ubr2.sbo-lex.ma.cable.rcn.com |
| English grammer es un problemo. Ravaged should not be capitalized in the middle of a sentence. Yea that overlord thing seemed pretty weird too. Err it seemed awfully one sided seeing as how your ally did just about...nothing and you did everything and still couldn't put up a good fite against those guys. |
| #10 ZerG~LinG[115606] |
| p443-59.ppp.get2net.dk |
It wasn't great, and wasn't suck.
I guess a 5-6 thing is fair.
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| #11 Jolly_Pyrophile (bnet name)[115772] |
| sys-216.114.73.201.primarynetwork.com |
| Your report was kinda sucky I would never do a report about me or anyoone on my team who left then lost the game. Smart people (none of u 4 who played) build photons, bunkers, and sunkens to protect your base. But you dont mention any of that, meaning you either suck at the game or suck at making reports. A, I think your partner was a dumbass for making wraiths only, no missile turrets to block his base from overlord drops, and blocking you in getting killed. I know its normally not right, but thats the type of person you would backstabb just to get him out of the way. And also, I would like to know how you made overlords with protoss, it really interests me. :) |
| #12 HarvKilljoy[115851] |
| 192.189.112.134 |
Hiya Folks!
Indeed, I too want to know how Overlords are produced in a Protoss base w/o an infestation of Zerg there. That being said, though, this sounds like a few newbies having a good time. Folks who rip ya, Zorg, are most likely more experienced and are just inclined to rip, I guess- it takes all kinds!
Your writing is gradually improving, so just keep at it. We don't expect you to write a best-selling novel overnight, nor a "10" report in a day. Keep at it, use the rips for constructive criticism where applicable, and don't give up.
I'd like to offer up a game, 2v2 on Temple, 1v1 if you'd like, just to have some fun and give you a better example of what a Terran commander can do. I enjoy the game and am not looking to brag about my skill or make you look bad- that is NOT my intent whatsoever. Besides, it'd be fun to have ya write about me so folks can rip on my gaming skills or lack thereof!
HARV |
| #13 CaughtNaked[116045] |
| proxys.sj3.marketscore.com |
thought id comment since there arent that many, i didnt read it but text onlys with HTML dont bother me so much.
if u wanna go gold though u either hav to double the amount of text u hav or add a pic or 2 |
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