| #1 StriderBlack[116961] |
| 151.165.252.64.snet.net |
Who's Your Daddy?!? Kane is your daddy!
Ownage man. Great job. |
| #2 Kane[116962] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
| =] |
| #3 Black_Abyss[116963] |
| 01-135.057.popsite.net |
God I love it!
3rd
I can't wait for part 5! |
| #4 vincible[116964] |
| roam155-218.student.harvard.edu |
Nice. I like the random Madeline L'Engle reference.
Biggest problem: Gerard takes the gun from Jon then throws it away. A couple lines later, Jon drops the gun that he no longer has. Very bad.
I like how you manage to maintain an air of mystery about all this. Kind of like the X-files, back when it was good. Of course if you go another two months without any resolution I'll start getting irritated. :=) |
| #5 Psyonic_Reaver[116965] |
| 1Cust145.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
| Your pic that says Cit-Kane is the final boss from "Crono Trigger" (That game rules all) |
| #6 Mistears[116968] |
| cpe-24-31-39-161.socal.rr.com |
ur final picture is great.
chrono trigger was my most enjoyable rpg ever,
even if ff3 was better gamewise.
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| #7 vincible[116969] |
| roam155-218.student.harvard.edu |
Wow, you wrote chess battlereports! Cool idea.
I also think that you're recycling too much. When the magician stumbled like that, I thought, "Hmm, that's like the submersile technician. And the spaceship technician. And the reporter. And practically everyone who's not Gerard..." |
| #8 CrackHeadJeb[116975] |
| mu-197049.dhcp.missouri.edu |
eee
Okay, I finally had to read this series. (since I glanced over this one and thought, 'wtf is going on?'. and I didn't want to have to start reading when you had the 10th installment out)
I can't wait until the next installment. I rarely say that about a fanfic. ;)
-CHJ |
| #9 User14[116979] |
| spider-ntc-tb064.proxy.aol.com |
| Another good one, vincible doesn't know what he's talkin about ;[ |
| #10 UltimateFire[116985] |
| spider-ntc-tb084.proxy.aol.com |
| put more into each segment ;[. this one didnt answer nearly enough questions. I MUST KNOW!!! |
| #11 Jekpo![116989] |
| c216-45-83-226.md1.cablespeed.com |
| When does part 5 come :D |
| #12 ZerG~LinG[116997] |
| p431-069.ppp.get2net.dk |
| MAD END PIC |
| #13 Kane[116998] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
Thanks all for your comments.
#4: I'll correct that sometime later today =p |
| #14 Redemption6[117003] |
| cache-1.sbo.ma.webcache.rcn.net |
| Great fanfic as usual, itz not as good as the first few though, the suspense wasnt as good. Notice the word as. It was still really good. |
| #15 SiG.[117015] |
| host-216-77-217-221.fll.bellsouth.net |
I like your story, Kane.. ownage.
BTW, Lavos's final form is a BITCH to kill (last pic)
Even if I totally own at CT, it was hard as hell. |
| #16 Kane[117023] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
| Lavos is so powerful, it's almost unfair. But I kicked his ass in the end o_O |
#17  [117080] |
| St-Catherines-ppp112443.sympatico.ca |
| Dammit I wish I could rate an 8.5, this was very good :D. Plz INCLUDE THAT MOOSE HUNT THO ;( |
| #18 Kane[117081] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
| I don't think a moose hunt will happen, as the plot is headed nowhere near Canada. Sorry =[ |
| #19 IcE-Inforcer[117113] |
| 209.105.210.34 |
Wow... everyone likes it.
Ima gonna start readin' this. |
| #20 Kane[117216] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
YESSSS I got the front page hookup again!
I WUB YOU MARK4 (or JV, or Fox1, or YRM... If it was YRM, he should stop fooling with the front page and WRITE SOME DAMN REPORTS T.T) |
#21  [117231] |
| user254.net069.fl.sprint-hsd.net |
| dude, I even signed the post |
| #22 Kane[117245] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
| wow, hak |
| #23 SarcasticSage[117434] |
| gateway-alameda.uscg.mil |
| What can I say, I enjoy this series and have been hooked for a while. Pls write more SOON! Else you'll force me to unleash my sarcasm on you. OoooOOooo Scary O.o |
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