| #1 stonecoldnewbie[118960] |
| c-24-245-65-189.mn.client2.attbi.com |
| first |
| #2 stonecoldnewbie[118961] |
| c-24-245-65-189.mn.client2.attbi.com |
| pretty nice... id say 8 maybe 9 :o gj and btw 1st and 2nd ;) |
| #3 Decay[118962] |
| 206.10.109.73 |
| 3rd, now to read..... |
| #4 IcE-Dark_Lord[118963] |
| 22.PPP.NBY1.ENOREO.ON.CA |
| I really liked it pics were ok id give it an easy 7 mabbe an 8. really good job. |
| #5 Decay[118964] |
| 206.10.109.73 |
OK, read it now, and its good. I'd say 8 ;)
~Decay
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| #6 Psychochild[118968] |
| 14.orlando-23-24rs.fl.dial-access.att.net |
| Yes I know. Florida's a bitch in the summer months. Esecially when I'm sitting in mu un-air conditioned room for as many hours as I.. Oh yeah, the report. Good game, nice writing and pics. I liked. That should be more than good enough to get a gold. |
| #7 Black_Abyss[118970] |
| 01-152.057.popsite.net |
This was pretty good, although the sig pic was a little disturbing...
8-9 |
#8  [118972] |
| St-Catherines-ppp112552.sympatico.ca |
wow, huge improvement. Just get rid of that last picture - ick! Good writing, a lack of humour, nice pics on the whole and a great game. I'd say 8.4.
I remember watching this rep, lol. PRIDE HOW COULD YOU NOT WIN!!@!! ;). |
| #9 Kane[118978] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
| learn html, im not reading a report thats 2000 pixels wide |
| #10 [118979] |
| St-Catherines-ppp112552.sympatico.ca |
It's not wide on my browser.
Also, make a better title btw, forgot to add that in earlier ;] |
| #11 adrenaling[118981] |
| CPE014100005949.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| really nice poo, i knew id like this. =] |
| #12 vincible[118983] |
| roam155-218.student.harvard.edu |
It's not wide on my browser, but for some reason the title and rating are way down at the bottom of the report. wtf? Probably Bill Gates' fault.
Good job with the report. When I saw the replay I was in agony wondering how the hell Pride could possibly lose when he had the entire map and 200 supply of troops. Sheesh. |
| #13 mattzarella[118987] |
| 93.116.26.24.cfl.rr.com |
| you're a very vulgar boy |
| #14 Who'sGotLag.IDO[118991] |
| usrns153.dialup.hawaii.edu |
Yah, me got the same problem as #12 vincible, width is fine though.
This was a much better game than the last one and deserves at least one 8 rating, but there were some errors that might lower it. You made several small descriptional errors which made things confusing. 2 examples follow:
1. You said that Pride dropped a templar on the plateau, but you really meant that he dropped it on the natural's cliff.
2. Pride had the 3 farthest right expansions, but McNasty had all the expansions to the "right" of it?
Also, the pics were better, but didn't really show the action in some, emphsize some, of the battles. You described what sounded like an interesting battle, but either didn't show it or showed the aftermath which is kinda boring. Examples being the hydra drop on Pride and the series of Ultra battles with Pride's army (which maybe should have been collaged).
***Part 2 below*** |
| #15 Who'sGotLag.IDO[118992] |
| usrns153.dialup.hawaii.edu |
***Part 2***
You had some unnecessary pics such as the initial units pics (just 1 pic showing the 2 groups seeing each other might have been better) and some small unit battles which could have been done without.
I'd say slightly under an 8, say 7.5-7.9
PS. While swearing may be part of your style, it didn't really seem necessary. Also didn't really like the abbreviation "Lots" but that might just be me.
PPS. I noticed that in all 3 of your "official" br's that you always list the winning player first in the title pic ( Rush)Zone, Testosterone, & Eon)McNasty )
As for simply personal taste, the title pics texture is distracting and the picture placement seems alittle haphazard (though it is up to personal choice how regimented your br looks, you might not want it looking too strict and impersonal) |
| #16 (...BlaZe...)[118993] |
| internett2proxy.fellesdata.no |
maybe im just tired but I did not finish. It seemed a bit .. uh ... undetailed, in the beginning it seemed like mcnasty had no economy at all and suddenly he seemed to have all these troops. I kinda lost interrest, may read it later tho.
8 seems fine. |
| #17 PooHandler[118996] |
| adsl-35-2-205.bct.bellsouth.net |
| =) Thanx |
| #18 titans-thesoby[118997] |
| station4.govwentworth.k12.nh.us |
| SWEET GJ |
| #19 Zeal1590[119000] |
| spider-to052.proxy.aol.com |
| that was a gg ^^. GJ definatley a gold. |
| #20 ThePalisade[119003] |
| 170.158.213.71 |
| Enjoyable but I had a little bit of a hard time connecting the pictures to the text at certain points. I also noticed that Pride employed Dark Archons and maelstrom in a picture but you NEVER mentioned it. That's an interesting detail you shouldn't have left out. On the whole, the 8 is well deserved. |
| #21 DarkRider[119009] |
| 198.134.2.2 |
Pretty good
Using funny alt-text would have made this a better report.
Can you post the replay?
Someone link it for me?
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| #22 [119015] |
| St-Catherines-ppp126346.sympatico.ca |
| DarkRider, search for Pride in the replay section :). The game is 10 rated and fairly recent. |
| #23 PooHandler[119024] |
| adsl-17-218-41.mia.bellsouth.net |
| It is only necessary to include a picture of poo. I mean, come on, I'm PooHandler. I'll try to tone the next one down for you. Oh, BTW, #13. Vulgar, schmulgar. This report is really THAT vulgar. You wanna see vulgar. I'll put my vulgar foot right up your ass. J/K. Just chill. It's just how I talk. Don't be such a pansy. |
| #24 zidane57[119036] |
| 1Cust226.tnt87.chi5.da.uu.net |
| so i take it u liked the replay i gave u... |
| #25 PooHandler[119038] |
| adsl-17-218-41.mia.bellsouth.net |
| #24, Yeah. That replay was awsome. I think I even told U that I watched it and would report it. Thanx. |
| #26 HnR)Pride[119060] |
| London-HSE-ppp3539882.sympatico.ca |
| That's the cool nydus thing that everyone was talking about? Oh cool. Hehehe. Can't believe I lost that game. His ramp forces and defiler micro were too strong for me to take out in the end. |
| #27 ZerG~LinG[119084] |
| p459-82.ppp.get2net.dk |
Hi Mr. Handler Of teh Poop.
Nice report, the pics were although the titel pic was over-textured. I did all this overtexturing too when I first got photoshop :P
Haven't read the whole report yet, but so far so good, glad you found a good game with recognizable players.
Will comment more when I've read everything |
| #28 ck-RiCe_eAtEr and AzN_DiAmOnD[119116] |
| 169.199.140.249 |
| the HELL! that was hella dope!me and muh friend thinks it was coo..... but gotta learn 2 upgrade faster.....but other than that it was kooo....we both lyke protoss!oh and AzN pRyDe! |
| #29 BigD[119139] |
| px2so.cg.shawcable.net |
| Wow. Best report in a while. Great first try. Except for that ending picture. Great graphics, well written. |
| #30 ZerG~LinG[119196] |
| p434-089.ppp.get2net.dk |
Read it all, kakakakakakkakakakaka
I'd say a solid 8 |
| #31 n00b[119341] |
| pool-138-89-70-229.mad.east.verizon.net |
Ending sig picture ruled! Doesn't anyone watch South Park? Mr. Handy the X-Mas Poo is their "special" holiday character. It is so funny and outrageous.
The BR structure and format was good, just a bit rough in some places as mentioned in previous comments. Needed more copy editing. I noticed spelling mistakes, grammer mistakes, map description mistakes, etc, etc... Is "whord" a real word? Did you mean hoard? |
| #32 PooHandler[119541] |
| adsl-34-81-117.mia.bellsouth.net |
I suppose I DID mean hoard. Whord is closer to whore. Shows my focus. Anyway, thanks.
-PH |
| #33 zidane57[119697] |
| adsl-66-72-98-151.dsl.chcgil.ameritech.net |
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