| #1 Lieutenant[122613] |
| adsl-66-72-132-103.dsl.dytnoh.ameritech.net |
| Report, baby! Woot! |
| #2 Raven31[122614] |
| 100-50-189-66.wo.cpe.charter-ne.com |
| Looks good. |
| #3 Zeals~o~Valor[122618] |
| h24-86-186-55.ed.shawcable.net |
| 3rd |
| #4 Sexy^Orangutang[122622] |
| 12-234-99-99.client.attbi.com |
| nice |
| #5 Amoeba_Boy[122623] |
| 209-pool9.ras11.vahen.tii-dial.net |
"While it made an attempt to stop the intruder and single attack isn't exactly enough to flatted a Probe and now it was running wild in my base buzzing over grass, blinking, and other fierce Probe fright-tactics."
Someone please tell me what the hell that sentence means.
Anyway, this report was ok. There were spelling and grammer mistakes by the bucketload, and the games were sub-par. The pics didn't show as much as I would have liked them to.
If I had holy rating power id give this a 5 or 6. |
| #6 Lieutenant[122627] |
| adsl-66-72-132-103.dsl.dytnoh.ameritech.net |
Yeah, i just re-read it. ;o I usually worked on it durring late nights and after finishing a rough spellcheck w/ pics added I submitted it (might have skipped the check on the whole first game). Took nearly a week of squeezing in odd hours to work on it every day, and I was starting to get tired of it. >=T
"While it made an attempt to stop the intruder, *a* single attack isn't exactly enough to flatten a Probe and now..." |
| #7 mattzarella[122639] |
| cache-da02.proxy.aol.com |
| gooder grammar plz |
| #8 Arsenic[122650] |
| sdn-ap-007caburbP0026.dialsprint.net |
| This was shit |
| #9 LuckyNewbie:P[122658] |
| dialup-209.245.5.81.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
| "your grammer and wording was awkward A LOT" |
| #10 zeon[122682] |
| CPE014100005949.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| STARCRAFT 4EVA! |
| #11 CaughtNaked[122698] |
| dsc09.waf-dc-2-74.rasserver.net |
| it_was_long._But_it_pained_me_to_even_read_the_first_paragraph._Much_more_the_second_game. |
| #12 CaughtNaked[122699] |
| dsc09.waf-dc-2-74.rasserver.net |
| Lol________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ |
#13 [122703] |
| StCatherines-ppp109080.sympatico.ca |
gotta work on that writing ;)
gw CN :/ |
| #14 Lieutenant[122709] |
| 67.39.30.159 |
| >=D |
| #15 DarkRider[122832] |
| 198.134.2.2 |
after a while the humor got to me
Early I liked the 0-285-0 I think
lol |
| #16 Lieutenant[123200] |
| adsl-67-39-2-229.dsl.dytnoh.ameritech.net |
As you might have noticed I was in the middle
of working on a good pic system. Still...
grammer > me t.t |