| #1 Zeal1590[125595] |
| cache-ra01.proxy.aol.com |
| omg 1st! |
| #2 Zeal1590[125596] |
| cache-ra01.proxy.aol.com |
| now to read |
| #3 Some_God[125597] |
| proxy.ord.marketscore.com |
| I hope this is good enough of an EE BR with enough explanations and HTML ... plz comment!!!! |
| #4 Zeal1590[125598] |
| cache-ra01.proxy.aol.com |
Nice report! even though i dont have EE:(
good job for your 2nd report |
| #5 Some_God[125599] |
| proxy.ia2.marketscore.com |
| its my 3rd report and i was kidding about the 16 pics |
| #6 ZeaL-[125600] |
| cache-ra01.proxy.aol.com |
| 3rd secornd whatever, at least you spend some time on it with pretty good writing and nice pics. |
| #7 ZeaL-[125601] |
| cache-ra01.proxy.aol.com |
| Me=comment whore today |
| #8 Some_God[125603] |
| proxy.ia2.marketscore.com |
| I still have messed up writing but it will get better when school starts =) |
| #9 Zeal-[125606] |
| cache-ra01.proxy.aol.com |
| damn my school started last week :( |
| #10 andaca[125607] |
| ool-4353591e.dyn.optonline.net |
Dragoons are the cavalry with guns.
not dragons? Correct me if im wrong, but.... |
| #11 Some_God[125610] |
| proxys.sjc.marketscore.com |
| is that all you care about.... and i did zoom in for your information on the dragon shot |
| #12 Some_God[125611] |
| proxy.ia3.marketscore.com |
| OOps it is Dragoon... damn that Starcraft messed me up on that... but anyway HOW WAS MY REPORT |
| #13 UltimateFire[125612] |
| cache-ntc-ad01.proxy.aol.com |
Meh, Broodwar looks better the more I see reports and reviews of other games =D
Maybe next time find a better game, I mean it seemed like that Baron guy was just not very skilled. Also, you still do a bad job describing the way things work for EE, but its better at least. |
| #14 Some_God[125613] |
| proxy.ia2.marketscore.com |
| STOP FLAMING ME!!!! and EE |
| #15 Freque[125619] |
| sdn-ap-007caburbP0324.dialsprint.net |
| Dont comment so much, Some_God :) |
| #16 leading edge[125621] |
| p-proxy-1-int0.net.wisc.edu |
I'm glad that was your spelling error and not the game's...
Any game that rates dragoons as being superior to cuirassier in melee combat is not worth playing.
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| #17 Strupisch[125623] |
| proxys.sj4.marketscore.com |
| I liked this actually. Much improved! However, on the whole the shots were STILL ZOOMED OUT!!! sheesh... The battle scenes are all were nice, but they were still a little hard on my eyes to try to make sense of. However, this is far better than your first one. gj Some_God |
| #18 Freque[125638] |
| sdn-ap-007caburbP0321.dialsprint.net |
ok, now that I've actually read the thing I have some comments:
Try to avoid run-on sentences. There were a few times that definate punctuation was needed. Also you got into a few phases where you started capitalizing the first letter of every word. I wasnt sure if that was intentional and if it was, i couldnt see why. There was a little bit of forced humor in there too. Just let it flow. Much better than your first, this is probably a 6. |
| #19 willwinforfood[125641] |
| ool-18b817a1.dyn.optonline.net |
they arent flaming you..
"plz tell me how this BR looked felt and smelled. RATERS DON’T BE SHY AND GIVE THIS MORE THAN A 7!!! I need to know everything that was wrong in this report to make everything in the next one right."
peace,
-wwff |
#20  [125643] |
| pcp660145pcs.prshng01.fl.comcast.net |
10. :)
Where's my check? |
| #21 demon_blade3[125644] |
| dsc06.ivn-ca-1-224.rasserver.net |
| i would give it a 10 cause i'm damn tired and dont want to read the report if it doesnt have atomic bombers. damn atomic bomber dissing whore, i should give you a 1! |
| #22 Some_God[125664] |
| proxy.ia3.marketscore.com |
| CB give me a 10 and ill give you a check =) and demon ill just say that you have some issues |
| #23 Some_God[125669] |
| proxy.ia3.marketscore.com |
| Damn almost 24 hours and still no rating?!?!?! |
| #24 willwinforfood[125674] |
| ool-18b817a1.dyn.optonline.net |
cause cb is still waiting for your check..
damn almost 24 hours and only 9 comments by some_god!? |
| #25 demon_blade3[125689] |
| dsc06.ivn-ca-2-168.rasserver.net |
| hey i defended you from TIME by saying i worship you, YOU OWE ME ATOMIC BOMBERS! |
| #26 Some_God[125690] |
| proxy.ia4.marketscore.com |
| Ok Ok i will put a atomic explosion on my next BR ok? |
| #27 DarkRider[125696] |
| 198.134.2.2 |
MUCH! better then your last report.
One thing though..does the pics in EE suck? Some have no color. Try to get some pics of the units actually exchanging blows.
Also, you said that," this unit owns that unit." etc. Explain why. |
| #28 SAD[125697] |
| px2wh.vc.shawcable.net |
The Report was just a bit too wide to fit onto my screen, so its a little annoying to scroll left and right at certain times.
Also, I gets very annoying when you use the word 'own' in 3 sentences in a row. They stand out especially if you put them in caps. |
| #29 Some_God[125705] |
| proxy.or3.marketscore.com |
Heh ya i guess your right but i have to get the thought out of my head that everyone know EE and what im talking about : (
Dark thanx alot.. the pics appear grey because i put in the photoshop so its greyscale =| |
#30  [125729] |
| 12-222-61-61.client.insightBB.com |
| This was decent, but I couldn't see a damn thing in most of your screenshots. I'd typically give this type of report a 6, but there is so little gold on the front page so 7. |
| #31 Some_God[125732] |
| proxy.ia2.marketscore.com |
| Yes Finally a gold !!!!! IM THE GREATEST !! .. sorta |
| #32 LuckyNewbie:P[125734] |
| dialup-209.245.0.177.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
| i thought they were called "dragoons" and not "dragons" |
| #33 demon_blade3[125741] |
| dsc05.ivn-ca-0-233.rasserver.net |
thank you,
BOOM BOOM! |
| #34 demon_blade3[125742] |
| dsc05.ivn-ca-0-233.rasserver.net |
| they are dragoons, and might as well give me a damned gold. |
| #35 IcE-Inforcer[125744] |
| proxy.or4.marketscore.com |
Decent I guess... lotsa run-ons... lame pics... shitty game =D
-IcE-
---Get W3--- |
| #36 Some_God[125762] |
| proxy.ia2.marketscore.com |
| I would but i need better video card =( |
| #37 ZerG~LinG[125782] |
| p463-99.ppp.get2net.dk |
| Need some work on the pics (EE actually looks amazing) and maybe you should lay off some of the "OWNED§!!!!§§11½" stuff, it gets tiring in the end. |
| #38 [125789] |
| proxy.ia2.marketscore.com |
| well thats how you guys talk in your reports but anyway im taking a little break from BRing |
| #39 __SpiRiT__[125791] |
| h000802b985a1.ne.client2.attbi.com |
| Definatly an improvement! a job very well done! |
| #40 Some_God[125792] |
| proxy.or4.marketscore.com |
| oops forgot to put my name in |
| #41 Who'sGotLag.IDO[125795] |
| usrns63.dialup.hawaii.edu |
You made 15 out of the 42 comments preceeding this Some_God, it's safe to say we can figure out #40 was you.
You might want to lurk in the comment sections less, makes you seem kinda desperate. Just let comments accumulate and answer in fewer multi-answer posts, plus you don't have to explain everything to us. =)
PS. Criticisms are not flames |
| #42 Some_God[125805] |
| proxy.ia2.marketscore.com |
Oh ok so thats why theres sometimes 20 comments and 1 author comment. Strange though. But after i make a BR i feel hyped and want to do everything.
Oh and i think when someone says "the pics suck the game u reported on sucks then that must mean the whole game SUCKS!" it means they are flaming me and/or the game |
| #43 Some_God[125806] |
| proxy.ia2.marketscore.com |
Hoped that explained evrything to u guys =)
and you can now say i made 17 out of 44 =) |
| #44 Decay[125807] |
| 206.10.109.63 |
try 18/45. -_-;
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| #45 [125808] |
| proxys.sj4.marketscore.com |
| try 19/47 =| |
| #46 CyMaN[125866] |
| pD952395A.dip.t-dialin.net |
| i think u made an error with your directions description in the beginning .. it differs with what u see on the screenshot |
| #47 CyMaN[125867] |
| pD952395A.dip.t-dialin.net |
| from |
| #48 IcE-Inforcer[125934] |
| NorthBay-ppp-209-91-189-221.vianet.ca |
Sry bout the first post, I was very tired and dumb.
First of all, get a new comp =D. they're very cheap now u can prolly find a good deal out there. Its like 200$ for a P500mghz which is just enoug to run W3 (good video card is thnx).
Second, get someone to proofread for you. Even when you proofread youself there's stuff you won't see. So go see your mommy or cornerstore dood and tell him to check it out.
Btw: I didn't say the game u played sucked, I said the game itslef sux because W3 ownz so bad =D!
-IcE- |
| #49 IcE-Inforcer[125935] |
| NorthBay-ppp-209-91-189-221.vianet.ca |
One more thing, don't flame people back, it makes you look not so nice. Only retaliate when they are totaly wrong and/or you need to justify an important point.
Now for a test. |
| #50 SUPER_ENIHALATOR8000[125936] |
| NorthBay-ppp-209-91-189-221.vianet.ca |
| SOME_GOD EATS PENIS FOR BREAKFAST!!!!!! |
| #51 IcE-Inforcer[125937] |
| NorthBay-ppp-209-91-189-221.vianet.ca |
| (Remember, do not flame him back). |
| #52 demon_blade3[125944] |
| dsc06.ivn-ca-0-222.rasserver.net |
| don't you mean, "Don't flame me back."?? |
| #53 Some_God[125974] |
| proxys.sj4.marketscore.com |
Super are you by any chance TIME? (trying to keep all bad things from being thrown at him)
And Ice STFU cauze Empire Earth does not suck... EE is the best strategy game iv played. WC3 has good graphics but thats all i can see. |
| #54 IcE-Inforcer[125980] |
| NorthBay-ppp-209-91-170-25.efni.com |
Cuz u cant play it on ur comp =D.
Dood, I was trying to help u. And u got pissed at me. Have fun writing ur next report.
Btw: Super IS me genius look at IP. I said EE sucked compared to W3 but thats my opinin ok, and the =D beside the sentence means "no harm intended".
-IcE- |
| #55 SoldierODoom[125986] |
| proxy.or3.marketscore.com |
| Hey IcE your know you suck cock and hate cunts???? |
| #56 Some_God[125987] |
| proxy.or3.marketscore.com |
| ( Remember do not flame him ice ^^ ) |
| #57 CrackHeadJeb - Rater[126185] |
| alteon-pcc2.iats.missouri.edu |
Yeah, this is about a 6.5. I'll leave it be, though, since I feel guilty about rating reports late. (and one week is damn late)
Keep working on your writing. You're taking small steps forward. Take a gigantic leap forward next time, I know you have it in you.
-CHJ |
| #58 demon_blade3[126556] |
| dsc06.ivn-ca-1.rasserver.net |
| and put an atomic bomb explosion in your next one, complete with a blow up body that you will label: "TIME's" thank you. |
| #59 indian[126660] |
| 203.90.88.114 |
donno abt the players but cool reporting for sure!!!
tell u what - u get those pics organized and u hav a truly a1 dope. |
| #60 Black99[144878] |
| HSE-London-ppp207369.sympatico.ca |
| I give it a 7.5 cause wat the hell is owned |
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