| #1 Yellow_sn0w[127083] |
| ool-18ba2a75.dyn.optonline.net |
| fiznirst |
| #2 Undefeated[127084] |
| ip-pa-jtown-24-159-011-068.charterpa.com |
| Please, no one say anything bad, this is my first fic. |
| #3 ZerG~LinG[127092] |
| p440-117.ppp.get2net.dk |
Hmmm.
It was VERY short.
If a fic is going to be interesting, you'd have to write more, much more. |
| #4 kevin[127098] |
| syr-66-67-98-241.twcny.rr.com |
| The sentences were a tad short and many were improper. It was hard to read for those two reasons. |
| #5 Some_God[127106] |
| proxy.ia4.marketscore.com |
| This looks boring and im not going to make any comments cauze ZerGs report stole my heart ;D |
| #6 Undefeated[127125] |
| ip-pa-jtown-24-159-011-068.charterpa.com |
| Jeez, this is my first freaking fan fic, dont have to be so harsh! |
| #7 vincible[127130] |
| TANG-TWO-SIXTY-ONE.MIT.EDU |
| Well, there were a few grammatical errors--you need to proofread a bit more carefully. More importantly, though, the story was very ordinary. There was nothing to distinguish it from the many other fanfics that have been posted. |
| #8 TM[127139] |
| dsc08.dai-tx-1.rasserver.net |
Um, what the hell?
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| #9 Some_God[127140] |
| proxys.sj4.marketscore.com |
| ??? |
| #10 Chris[127143] |
| astound-64-85-237-205.ca.astound.net |
I hate to break it to you...
But this sucked ass, even for a first report.
First of all, it wasn't interesting enough from the beginning. Give the damn thing a title, a background, or something.
Second of all, even though I forced myself to read this, I still hated it. Too many overused cliches and situations.
Third of all, don't get pissy cause people don't like it. Its their honest opinion and what they think.
Game Over. Try again? |
| #11 undefeated[127149] |
| ip-pa-jtown-24-159-011-068.charterpa.com |
| Sorry I got made and I do agree it was a queerbait story. I could do better |
| #12 HasuN00b[127159] |
| pool-138-89-70-64.mad.east.verizon.net |
Read other fanfics before trying your own. It's not like your's is the first one ever. That 6.0 fanfic by jimmy a few days ago was a passable first try. Readers aren't babies, they have expectations.
Based on these comments, I'm not going to waste my time reading just to get annoyed. |
| #13 Undefeated[127165] |
| ip-pa-jtown-24-159-011-068.charterpa.com |
| I just made another fan fic, please read it, if you dont like it then you dont have to ever read any of my fanfics again, its called: The Planet Devian |
| #14 AnotherOne[127215] |
| acdc.rrcnet.com |
| Try to spend more time on it... |
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