| #1 Some_God[127167] |
| proxy.ia4.marketscore.com |
This is agood FanFic. Its funny and intresting. Some spelling errors
*waiting for next part*
5
Some_God |
| #2 andaca[127169] |
| ool-4353591e.dyn.optonline.net |
| sub-par fanfics.....consuming all before them....no escape.... |
| #3 -Patton-[127176] |
| cache-mtc-aa01.proxy.aol.com |
| *Kills self* |
| #4 Decay[127180] |
| 206.10.109.63 |
| WTF? You start a new fic twice a day? If you want to write well, and get a good response, either : 1) Write battle reports, not fics; 2) Read through it before submitting it and/or; 3) Make it longer, as nobody wants to read a 3 paragraph report. If you are serious about wanting to become a decent reporter, read through some of the guides here on the site, learn html, and then write a quality fic or report. |
| #5 HasuN00b[127187] |
| pool-138-89-70-64.mad.east.verizon.net |
Bad. You didn't read it over did you? If you did, get someone else to read it over. Don't post again without spending more time, and importantly improving the quality.
The brutal truth is, I don't think you write well enough to do a fanfic good enough for BR.com. The level of writing I expect for a fanfic is much higher than for a regular BR.
2 for bare effort. Maybe 3 if it was longer. |
| #6 :+:SlipKnoT:+:[127200] |
| atiy44hsy452e.ab.hsia.telus.net |
| This fucking sucked. |
| #7 vincible[127202] |
| TANG-TWO-SIXTY-ONE.MIT.EDU |
| You need to put in more time. You can't post two a day and expect them to be good. Take the time to come up with a really good concept, write carefully and proofread. |
| #8 Sovereignty[127211] |
| 131.109.123.112 |
| go sit on a pickett fence thx |
| #9 IBashar[127217] |
| coyotte-e.insat.com |
Stop with the Sc tag, please ! There are >6 reports in the Sc category and only 2 actual reports !
My hope vanishes twice a day ??? |
| #10 IcE-Inforcer[127224] |
| gateway.franco-nord.edu.on.ca |
| This wasn't very good. Spel chck it next time. Or get someone else to do that 4 u. |
| #11 Undefeated[127260] |
| ip-pa-jtown-24-159-011-068.charterpa.com |
If it makes some of you happy, I am not going to make a second part. In fact i'm never going to write again.
Thanks,
Undefeated |
| #12 Chris[127313] |
| 169.199.140.249 |
Thank God.
Just read stuff like a normal person please. Don't even try to make a real report if you're gonna sux0r this bad. |
| #13 Undefeated[127332] |
| ip-pa-jtown-24-159-011-068.charterpa.com |
| I dont mean this in a mean way, but, what do you mean read stuff like a normal preson. |
| #14 Undefeated[127333] |
| ip-pa-jtown-24-159-011-068.charterpa.com |
| Oh wait, yes I do. Fuck all of you fags who say my writing sucks, go cut off your penises you he-shes. This message dosent comply to Some_God, meaning, I am not saying this about you Some_God, thank you for appreciating my good writing skills. Oh, and to all of you(exept Some_God) i'll always be twice the Starcraft players you are. |
| #15 Undefeated[127334] |
| ip-pa-jtown-24-159-011-068.charterpa.com |
This is a list of all the people who I dont mean to say bad things about:
Some_God
Ice-Enforcer
Tang-two-Sixty
Decay |
| #16 Chris[127435] |
| astound-64-85-237-205.ca.astound.net |
*cough* suck up *cough*
Maybe you should try writing after your 12th birthday. You COULD be more mature... or not.
Read stuff like a normal person? That means sit there, read a BR, do whatever you want, but don't post anything.
2x the starcraft players all of us are? Piss off. You think that means anything? |
| #17 Undefeated[127483] |
| ip-pa-jtown-24-159-011-068.charterpa.com |
| Go cut youre dick off, dick face. Oops, forgot you dont have one. |
| #18 Chris[127573] |
| astound-64-85-237-205.ca.astound.net |
Real funny, boy.
You sure made yourself look 1337 in front of everyone.
Go retake english. I failed it last time and I still spell better than you. |
| #19 Chris[127883] |
| astound-64-85-237-205.ca.astound.net |
sux0r sux0r sux0r
^^ |
| #20 Chris[127948] |
| astound-64-85-237-205.ca.astound.net |
| I still say this sux0r. ^^ |
| #21 Chris[127997] |
| astound-64-85-237-205.ca.astound.net |
| I hate you. I really, really hate you. |
| #22 Chris[128025] |
| 169.199.140.249 |
You make me write this again and again, wasting 5 minutes of my time reading and commenting every day.
Burn in hell. |
| #23 Undefeated[128072] |
| ip-pa-jtown-24-159-011-068.charterpa.com |
| Hey Dickwad, Im not making you do anything. You dont have to comment you fuck. Leave me alone if you hate me so much. The point of it all is FUCK YOU! |
| #24 Chris[128229] |
| astound-64-85-237-205.ca.astound.net |
"Leave me alone if you hate me so much."
That doesn't make sense. If I hated you so much, why would I ever want to stop harassing you?
I hate your report. |
| #25 Chris[128345] |
| astound-64-85-237-205.ca.astound.net |
| DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE ^^ |
| #26 Undefeated[128407] |
| ip-pa-jtown-24-159-011-068.charterpa.com |
Heh. Your a real funny one chris. Mocking, huh? That is very original. I like it.
youre friend, Undefeated |
#27 
IS KING!!![128423] |
| nr11-216-196-185-93.fuse.net |
| TEST |
| #28 <marquee>test</marquee>[128424] |
| nr11-216-196-185-93.fuse.net |
| test |
| #29 Chris[128453] |
| 169.199.140.249 |
| Heh. Now this report is good for tests! |
| #30 Undefeated[130301] |
| ip-pa-jtown-24-159-011-068.charterpa.com |
| Yep. You sure made yourself look real mature when you mocked me. Not only original,but immature. |
| #31 Chris[130302] |
| ip-pa-jtown-24-159-011-068.charterpa.com |
| Yeah, I know. Im a fucking fagget, who fucks his mom and dad. |
| #32 Chris[130437] |
| astound-64-85-237-205.ca.astound.net |
| ^^ |
| #33 Chris[133924] |
| astound-64-85-237-205.ca.astound.net |
| die |
| #34 Undefeated[134381] |
| ip-pa-jtown-24-159-011-068.charterpa.com |
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