| #1 TM[137347] |
| 1Cust13.tnt35.dfw9.da.uu.net |
| first! |
| #2 BiGRooStEr[137348] |
| pcp02936415pcs.dalect01.va.comcast.net |
| Well its 415 am so i jsut skimmped it, you misspelled protoss in the beg with ptotoss but that pictures didnt load either but ill read it again later |
| #3 TM[137349] |
| 1Cust13.tnt35.dfw9.da.uu.net |
Yah, it is late, 3:15 over here ^^
anyways, it looked pretty decent, cept for the fact that all the pics are broken.. |
| #4 Jaood[137352] |
| ip68-100-60-204.nv.nv.cox.net |
| Announcing the ending to a report before reading any of it really takes away some of the enjoyment of reading from a BR. |
| #5 Narcotik[137353] |
| dialups-416.palmer.mtaonline.net |
| For a First report this is ok. The game was kind of lame, so you might need to work on that. I dont deal to much into HTML (lazy mofo) so i cant really help you with those but overall its a good start ^^ |
| #6 hidden[137354] |
| 222.146-136-217.adsl.skynet.be |
| yeah, just try and fix those linx so we can c youre skill of screening ;) |
| #7 mick[137355] |
| 1Cust252.tnt13.bne1.da.uu.net |
| make a BR.com account for your pics |
| #8 The commentor from hell ever ever ever ever[137356] |
| dialup-209.244.100.93.Dial1.NewYork1.Level3.net |
hmm. few tips.
1: images didn't work for me
2: don't spoil whole game with title
3: Your writing was good with just a few grammer errors
4: report a longer game where someone doesn't fall to a dt
rush, maybe if he made a comeback it would be better
-So thats all. keep writing and make pictures work. I
give this 6, but you probably get gold if you do what i said
*nods* |
| #9 The commentor from hell ever ever ever ever[137357] |
| dialup-209.244.100.93.Dial1.NewYork1.Level3.net |
oh btw. :) terran > protoss if you know what to do. You
siege tanks on the cliff around their base. You also have goliaths and turrets around the tanks, and poof. He starts
getting weaker and riper for attack. Tank pushes like that must also include a few firebats, medics, and a touch of marines for those pesky zealots. Use your comsat station to see how many units he has. Once you can lock him into his
base with siege tanks, just slowly move them closer and he's
SCROOED.
(bleh!) |
| #10 LameJoker[137359] |
| pool-129-44-17-187.alb.east.verizon.net |
| I won't read untill the pix get fixed, cuz they're kinda important, ok plz fix em with fileread. |
| #11 LameJoker[137362] |
| pool-129-44-17-187.alb.east.verizon.net |
Well maybe I did read it :(
Ummmmmm, you can't say with any authority that toss owns terran if you're taking this extremely newbish game as evidence. Cmon, who researches seige mode instead of spider mines when DTs are knocking at the door? He forgot to repair his bunker?? He didn't notice that a DT was decimating his SCVs??? |
| #12 The commenter from hell ever ever ever ever[137363] |
| dialup-209.244.100.93.Dial1.NewYork1.Level3.net |
| #11 is the jesus of commenting. listen to him. |
| #13 FlavorOfYellow[137368] |
| ool-182d2b38.dyn.optonline.net |
um commenter blah blah whatever, you spelled grammar wrong in your post (man i hope thats right, gonna make me look like a total idiot if its not) oh well just pointing it out.
The pictures weren't broken for me, they just didn't load.
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| #14 Convider[137369] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3663172.sympatico.ca |
| pix didnt load for me either :( |
| #15 Commenter from hell ever ever ever ever[137370] |
| dialup-209.244.100.93.Dial1.NewYork1.Level3.net |
| roofl i spelled grammar wrong. my bad. |
| #16 Meloaf[137372] |
| rev-65-113-74-25.i-plus.net |
Thanks for the constructive crits, I'll keep them in mind when I make my next report.
I don't know why the imaged didnt load, they worked fine when I posted the report last night... Oh well.
I'll see what I can do about the images. |
| #17 Meloaf[137373] |
| rev-65-113-74-25.i-plus.net |
Here's a newbie question...
Can you edit reports? If so, how? |
| #18 LameJoker[137376] |
| pool-129-44-16-190.alb.east.verizon.net |
| yes you can, with a nifty lil thing called fileread. Too bad I don't know how it works. |
| #19 ZerG~LinG[137377] |
| p422-033.ppp.get2net.dk |
when u post a report, look in the bottom of the page, there'll be a line thats says Fileread blah blah blah, and you can enter the html file of the report. Remember to check it off.
Then whatever changes u make to the html file will appear in the report. |
| #20 ZerG~LinG[137378] |
| p422-033.ppp.get2net.dk |
First of all, not announcing at ANY POINT where the players are positioned of the map isn't very clever. It was a bit confusing.
Also I wont repeat what the other said about pix, writing etc.
Stick with reporting and you're making gold reports in no time. This however is a 6 at most. |
| #21 2Cautious[137392] |
| adsl-68-72-86-82.dsl.chcgil.ameritech.net |
Yah, get pix fixed. => Anyway, this was OK, but better game, & a longer one too. Oh, & the protoss should really have gotten the comsat 1st. Like I did that once... => anyway, I forgot the title almost immediately, so the game wasn't spoiled for me, but that's just because I'm stupid like that. =/
5-6 |
| #22 Newt[137400] |
| dsl3-63-249-85-66.cruzio.com |
Here are a few things to think about for your next report:
1. fix links, broken links are a waste of memory card space and so on...
2. make your report longer
3. report on better games, find longer ones or ones that aren'e played by n00bs. No offense to the n00bs but really, improve your game.
Other than that it was a fantastic BR (for someone's first) and you did a good job on it.
~Newt |
| #23 Cod[137401] |
| 63-224-57-159.dsl.uswest.net |
STOP MAKING BAD BATTLEREPORTS
BATTLEREPORTS ARE DEAD OK??? DEAD! |
#24  [137415] |
| imsbbcf07.netvigator.com |
| newb |
| #25 LameJoker[137427] |
| pool-129-44-17-245.alb.east.verizon.net |
| If BRs are dead, why do you come to this site? |
| #26 jimmy[137439] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
#25, thats too true
this br broke links
oops gtg cya
-NJ |
| #27 Will[137480] |
| 195.126.128.2 |
Thx to the ubershitty comment posting tool, I have lost my whole comment cos it was more than 1000 chars long (which is when it really hurts to lose it I guess) and of course there's no way to get the comment back. *flamethrower on*
I do it the quick way AND I copy/paste it before I submit this time (grumble).
Layout and html and pics were ok, but white background = bad. Alt-text is always welcome.
Style and spelling and grammar were rather ok. A few errors (site/sight) but nothing really bad. Maybe a bit too descriptive, though (no need to remind us a player needs to select a unit before giving it an order...)
The game was really poor and newbish (a wall-in? where?) and it's the main problem with your report.
Get your hands on a decent game and you can easily make it to gold. |
| #28 anonymous[137611] |
| HSE-Windsor-ppp211921.sympatico.ca |
| gj |
| #29 LurkerBurger7[137651] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| Crud Game, but nice html |
| #30 FzN)ViCTiM[139112] |
| host-69-19-150-166.rev.o1.com |
| I Feel Kinda Offended cuase I'm a gosu Terran player. Well for ur 1st BR i guess it was ok. Try to make a BR with a better Game. Latez |
| #31 Reaperofchaos[140620] |
| dsl-031-70.citizip.com |
Meloaf i told you protoss are a bad ass race, but the real question is why did you show a report with your opponent killing you, instead of a report in which you rape your opponent. Sadly they made turrets one of the weakest detectors as far as a defensive aspect goes.
DTS ARE BADASS. |
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