| #1 Anonymous[138337] |
| dialup-209.246.75.43.Dial1.NewYork1.Level3.net |
| :p |
| #2 Manius[138338] |
| ga-cmng-u2-c5c-118.cmngga.adelphia.net |
| 2nd |
| #3 EldritchEvil[138339] |
| nr11-216-196-187-84.fuse.net |
| Look, if you can post 4 chapters in the same day, why not do it in one report? |
| #4 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[138343] |
| cache-mtc-aa01.proxy.aol.com |
| BECAUSE HES AN IDIOT! if you can post 4 chapters in the same day, they are all either too short or too shitty, and in this case its both. For the love of god, stop submitting this trash! Could you BE any worse at the English language? |
| #5 Anonymous[138347] |
| dialup-64.152.169.242.Dial1.NewYork1.Level3.net |
| shutup time. I don't really care if my fanfics stink in your opinion. Just don't comment if you don't like it k? I'm sick of hearing you talk. |
| #6 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[138357] |
| h0003932041c0.ne.client2.attbi.com |
| comments can be good or bad, if you dont like the fact your stupid stories get only bad comments, STOP WRITING. |
| #7 2Cautious[138359] |
| adsl-68-72-108-167.dsl.chcgil.ameritech.net |
Heh, Ghosts & Vultures vs. an Ultralisk. =>
OK, but you're still having the same problems (see my comments on previous chapters of this story).
5-6 |
| #8 Notjimmy[138416] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
Read .Praetor of Drefsab's fanfics.
They, IMHO, are a prime example of a good fanfic.
5.5-6 |
| #9 NotJim[138550] |
| cvpp-p-144-138-156-109.prem.tmns.net.au |
| HALP HALP! LAST??!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!? |
| #10 Newt[138974] |
| dsl3-63-249-85-66.cruzio.com |
To the Author: Put more effort into your stories and learn more writing techniqes and you'll have a "7 worthy story"
To TIME: Dont talk like that to him TIME. If you think his story sucks say it nicely like, "Your story needs some improvement.". Also TIME, read my last comment on the Author's Volumes 11 &12. I apologized for my last post (above the first). It basically says i'm sorry that I called you a f**ker and some other stuff.
With that said, CYA LATER DUDES!!!
~Newt |
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