| #1 BlueRibbon[138844] |
| 65.167.44.142 |
Feel free to post any opinions or helpful idea's here. I'm like critism. :D Thanks once again.
-BR(My name abbriviation is the site abbriviation ;O.) |
| #2 BlueRibbon[138846] |
| 65.167.44.142 |
| I like Critism* PFFFT :D |
| #3 BiGRooSTeR[138847] |
| pcp02936415pcs.dalect01.va.comcast.net |
| My goodness, is this a real report? IS IT!?!? OH MY GOD... i shall read now.. thank you son of god you |
| #4 BiGROoStEr[138848] |
| pcp02936415pcs.dalect01.va.comcast.net |
| a few grammer problems like this "little but of repair" should be bit... also in the same section you said as I rebound. rebounded, but all ground good report i find.. good job |
| #5 BlueRibbon[138849] |
| 65.167.44.142 |
| Thanks Rooster, I got kind of lost in all the HTML and couldn't correct all of my grammer problems :p. Thanks. |
| #6 BiGRooStEr[138850] |
| pcp02936415pcs.dalect01.va.comcast.net |
| just reading the 1st part again.. i think if a toss player would send like 3 probes to harass once they find the oppoent... wear down the supply and cause it to be repaired.. and then send 2 more with a goon.. iono it could work... that would be 20-1 for the armor from goon.. 19 plus 5x4 [took 1 out for armor] 49 a hit.. not shabby iono, who knows i dont play toss so screw me |
| #7 Sabotage[138852] |
| pool-68-161-56-161.ny325.east.verizon.net |
whoa man. Very good for your first html! only thing is teh bg.
Your intro was kinda funny. yeah. few grammar problems
and the pictures were warped weirdly but it was good report.
use spellcheck and straighten out pictures. put borders aroudn them too. |
| #8 BlueRibbon[138853] |
| 65.167.44.142 |
Thanks Sabotage. I used Paint because I'm a cheap bastard and don't buy PrintShop or something better :p, so my pictures were kind of oddly put together. I'll put borders around my pictures from now on, and use spellcheck thanks for input.
-BR |
| #9 BlueRibbon[138854] |
| 65.167.44.142 |
Forgot this :p
Rooster that wouldnt work, I used to use protoss and if you failed that, you'd be in the shitter as far as economy goes so youd more than likely lose if the terran was a good repair man :D. |
| #10 PocketMarxist[138855] |
| mnet-baca244-13-199.monarch.net |
first off, most(if not all) of those quotes are on BR.coms quote list. jeez, there are a TON of awesome quotes not on the list, as it hasnt been updated in an incredibly long time.
however, the overall report was solid, if far from spectacular. some suggestions
1. pick a better game. you were winning almost the whole game.
2. background. im not going to explain it, as i am sure someone else will explain it 10x better than i could.
3. proofread. i shouldnt be saying this, as my comment is no doubt filled with typos, but there were some glaring mistakes.
still, as i said, it was solid, readable and enjoyable. we need more reports like this |
| #11 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[138857] |
| cache-da05.proxy.aol.com |
| HE POSTED BIT MAPS! GET OUTTA HERE YA HOBO! |
| #12 BlueRibbon[138859] |
| 65.167.44.142 |
#10 Thanks PocketMarxist, those quotes were all from BR.com because I enjoy them, not just because I wanted to be lazy and not go anywhere else. Thanks.
#11 Those bitmaps owned most of your Printshop pictures TIME. So please deal. :];O;D;];l;L;| |
| #13 mick[138877] |
| 1Cust74.tnt12.bne1.da.uu.net |
| You need MS Office installed to be able to save as jpegs with paint. Use a program like IrfanView to convert them, it's extremely easy. |
| #14 LurkerBurger7[138883] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| i didn't like it too much but not bad for a first try. |
| #15 2Cautious[138890] |
| adsl-68-72-164-31.dsl.chcgil.ameritech.net |
#10 pretty much had it, 'cept that I really don't care too much about a background. Fairly good.
5-6 |
| #16 BlueRibbon[138898] |
| 65.167.44.227 |
| Thanks #13-16, either for your praise or help. I'm currently working on another report and I shall try and double my effort and skills with it. Thanks Again. |
| #17 ZeaL[138906] |
| proxys.or4.marketscore.com |
| Great 1st report, i feel some ownage coming in the future for you, but this might be gold. JUst better games and a bit more fancy stuff and gold will be easy for you. |
| #18 LameJoker[138913] |
| pool-129-44-6-55.alb.east.verizon.net |
one question- what is <^>?
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| #19 BlueRibbon[138934] |
| 65.167.44.144 |
#18-Thanks Zeal. I know what I need to improve now and am going to work at it in the near future.
#19-LamerJoker, <^> is a middle finger ;D.
Mark4, I'm guessing it was you who gave me a 6, as you posted on one of the other articles rescently, so thank you.
-BR |
| #20 Oddity[138940] |
| h24-66-246-99.ss.shawcable.net |
post pics in .jpg
.bmp s are way too big and take way too long to load, they also waste way too much of br.com's bandwidth |
| #21 BlueRibbon[138942] |
| 65.167.44.144 |
Will do Oddity. ;D
-BR |
| #22 ScotTt[138943] |
| warp142163179128.newtel.com |
Just my opinion:
I found it a little inchorent at times, and I noticed a few spelling mistakes.
The pictures were extremely hard to follow. Try not to let them overlap, and put borders around them.
The color-coding of every single reference of the players quickly got annoying, and so did the constant use of emoticons.
On the bright side:
I enjoyed reading the report, appreciate your game taste, and recognize you as a competent player.
Hope this helps!
Bye,
Me |
| #23 NotJim[138956] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
I agree with most of the constructive comments above. I use MS Paint myself, so ha :P
Other than that, not bad at all! Read the reports of the greats (Hall of Fame)
You got a 6... I got a 6 as well! Perhaps you'll be good as me? :) |
| #24 ScotTt[138964] |
| warp142163179128.newtel.com |
Shut up Jim you cocky bastard.
LOL just kidding. Your reports are very enjoyable, you're a good reporter. |
| #25 BlueRibbon[139000] |
| host4.mvsd.com |
Thanks Scottt, I relize the constent color coating of My, I, He, His, and Me probably got annoying but after writing the whole thing I found it may have been easier to do that than to rewrite the report and talk in the 3rd person. The pictures were hard to follow and will try to make more clearible pictures on my following report.
NotJim MS Paint rules ;D. 6... prepare to see a 9 in a week or so ;D.
Thanks
-BR |
| #26 NotJim[139033] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
#25 - Hahaha ScotTt thanks :)
#26 - Good, some followers in the MS Paint side! I will get a 9 before you!
BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAhahahaha *hack* *cough* *ptoo*
Hehe. |
| #27 BlueRibbon[139070] |
| host4.mvsd.com |
| ;p |
| #28 School Safety Agent Tim[139087] |
| 165.155.64.130 |
Wow this report is so fucking great the last time i was this happy was last night at your house with your mom. But thats a whole different story unless you wanna hear it. I got tons of stories from your mom, his mom, and her mom and don't let me leave out the grandma's!!! OH YEA THATS SWEET LOVING!!!!!! And back to the game, which by the way i didn't really read the whole thing. So if your interested in defending your moms asshole from me you can play me anytime. I run under the name of SSA_Grady.
peace |
| #29 BlueRibbon[139097] |
| 65.167.44.183 |
YOUR MOM! HAHAHA I GOT YOU GOOD. Umm how is that offensive? You are a freakshow, and I would enjoy owning you 1v1 anytime, BlueRibbon on East. Thanks alot, dipshit.
-BR ;D |
| #30 NotJim - Non-existent Rater without a Tag[139122] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
| haha BR, gogogo :) |
| #31 School Safety Agent Tim[139133] |
| 165.155.64.130 |
Cool i knew my flaming would get me somewhere
i'll play you anytime, and i would give you my aim name if i didn't know what wackos roamed around this place, anyway if i ever see you online i'll whisper for a game |
| #32 School Safety Agent Tim[139134] |
| 165.155.64.130 |
| and it wasn't really supposed to be offensive, i am actually at work in the Department of Ed. and i really have nothing to do. just goes to show what NYC's tax money for education pays for. |
| #33 BlueRibbon[139136] |
| host4.mvsd.com |
For someone who works at the Department of Education, you lack the ability to spell, or capitialize your words. Its kind of sad. But, please whisper me, I've been looking for free wins.
-BR |
| #34 School Safety Agent Tim[139190] |
| 165.155.64.130 |
| uhhh ok... your wack. How are you going to try to make fun of someone because of their grammer you dumbass. LOL. Do you really think i care about it, and oh yea i will crush you. I'll post a few replays here when i get home so you can brush up on your game. |
| #35 School Safety Agent Tim[139191] |
| 165.155.64.130 |
| actually on second thought, i'll let you find out for yourself |
| #36 BlueRibbon[139543] |
| 65.167.44.202 |
Ok, Mr. Jackass,
I think you need to kind of focus on either one of two things. One, jacking off to self satisfaction, about how you think you could beat me, or two, actually messaging me, because you seem to avoid me. You never get on, and if you ever were(after writing such bullshit here, you should have been eager to show me up) you dodge me. So whatever. Next time you want to challange someone, maybe you should be on every now and then. |
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