| #1 el_sux0r[140167] |
| 0-1pool46-39.nas37.philadelphia1.pa.us.da.qwest.net |
Hey guys,
Style sheets pwn me, so I had to put the report in a link at the top of the page that I submitted.
3nj0y! |
| #2 LameJoker[140170] |
| pool-129-44-14-93.alb.east.verizon.net |
heh, NJ.
best newb game I've read in a while, very funny. |
| #3 Some_God[140171] |
| ool-18bc02b8.dyn.optonline.net |
Is it me or are the pics not working...
Cheers,
~SG~ |
| #4 Some_God[140173] |
| ool-18bc02b8.dyn.optonline.net |
| Nevermind the thing I said above... Oh ya 3rd and 4th YAY! |
| #5 el_sux0r[140174] |
| 0-1pool229-133.nas19.philadelphia1.pa.us.da.qwest.net |
Glad you enjoyed it =)
Feel free to leave comments and tips on how I can improve. |
| #6 Elated[140175] |
| c-66-41-72-64.mn.client2.attbi.com |
You've got a nice writing voice.
Don't use full size screenshots. You can cut out the interface. Try and find screenshots that actually show something interesting happening, not just random buildings sitting there.
Find a funnier newb bash game to report, or get a decent serious game. |
| #7 Convider[140177] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3661488.sympatico.ca |
| neat |
| #8 BiGRoOStEr/SepU1TuRa[140180] |
| pcp02936415pcs.dalect01.va.comcast.net |
| Looks good, i liked your style |
| #9 Random)Hero[140181] |
| adsl-61-31-133.mia.bellsouth.net |
all the pics wont show...
anyone else have this problem?
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| #10 andris[140185] |
| cache-ntc-aa02.proxy.aol.com |
| pics wont show, i hope u die |
| #11 Ender[140186] |
| 128.226.160.71 |
| i got no pics either but when some god corrected himself.. that's what's really confusing me.. |
| #12 Ender[140187] |
| 128.226.160.71 |
| oh lol i read the first line... found the link.. now to read =/ |
| #13 ZerG~LinG[140188] |
| p454-21.ppp.get2net.dk |
Hehe, newbs :)
Was pretty nice, some hilarious moments in there, and some nice writing like elated said.
Graphics dont have to be PNGs (although they okay) and maybe a bit more editing, like cutting off the bottom and maybe adding borders would help it.
Also, because of bad aligning, a pic covered an entire paragraph. Way too many little flaws for gold, so I guess a 6. |
| #14 Ender[140189] |
| 128.226.160.71 |
pretty good writing style.. the game kind of sucked skilled wise but the noobness of everything entertained me enough
zerg ling- i don't see any pics covering any paragraphs.. its either your browser or your eyes have x-ray vision to see through pics ;] |
| #15 Some_God[140191] |
| ool-18bc02b8.dyn.optonline.net |
This pics dont show on the first page but when you click on the link you see the BattleReport.
Cheers,
~SG~ |
| #16 Sovereignty[140195] |
| wsip68-15-45-159.ri.ri.cox.net |
yeah, you can always tell the shallow look-at-pictures-only people from those who actually read the report. If they had read it, they would've seen one of the first lines at the top telilng them to click the large, obtrusive link that brings them to a working page.
Other than that, horrible game :/ The writing was pretty good though. Noob bash games are so much more fun if you're leet though (ala mick). Noobs vs. Noobs on money maps usually dont make good br games. Looking forward to seeing more br's from you though |
#17  [140211] |
| 12-222-57-81.client.insightBB.com |
Great writing and a pretty funny little story.
7 |
| #18 funnymarx[140216] |
| dhcp085244.res-hall.northwestern.edu |
Never thought I'd see the day....
If you've fallen off the wagon, make sure to come visit the channel... (kemper, not sargent now)
--funnymarx
"A woman's life is in danger and he asks 'what difference does it make'. An this is the kind of charlatan you have running your store?" |
| #19 ZerG~LinG[140227] |
| p438-078.ppp.get2net.dk |
| #14: I use moz so any flaw is 100% due to microsoft denying web-standards. Or something. |
| #20 el_sux0r[140268] |
| 0-1pool228-212.nas19.philadelphia1.pa.us.da.qwest.net |
I suppose that's it. It looked OK on IE/Netscape.
Thanks for the comments, guys =) |
| #21 NotJim[140272] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
| Light and witty! The only two words that I can say.... |
| #22 NegativeTiger[140280] |
| 210.117.67.30 |
Eloquent. The writing has a wit that is heads and shoulders above many of even the best battle reports here. Many will disagree, but I say a 10.
The format was a bit off, the pictures rather bland, but adequate. A 5 for the visuals.
Improve your 'camera' work and format. KEEP the writing, don't listen to one iota of any loser comment about it being lame or any such nonsense.
Rawr, I say. - NegativeTiger |
| #23 NotJim[140284] |
| cvpp-p-144-138-156-59.prem.tmns.net.au |
| Average 10 and 5 = 7.5. Appropriate. |
#24  [140292] |
| mu-197049.dhcp.missouri.edu |
This amused me enough for a 7.
-CHJ |
| #25 The Wise One[140383] |
| 170.211.33.155 |
Very Amusing! This has always been my favorite report style. Newb Bashing
And the writing style was awsome. 8 |
| #26 You suck at writing battle reports[142762] |
| 12-207-199-21.client.attbi.com |
| You suck at writing battle reports |
| #27 el_sux0r[143015] |
| 0-1pool105-182.nas52.philadelphia1.pa.us.da.qwest.net |
26: Congratulations, sir. You have just told someone whose chosen name is 'the one who sucks' that he sucks.
Truly, your interpretive skills are to be commended. |
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