| #1 the-nut[140857] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
hope you liked
i know its really short
and it has comps
:- |
| #2 Sabotage[140858] |
| pool-68-160-248-97.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| Hi trevor, nothing to say |
| #3 Sabotage[140859] |
| pool-68-160-248-97.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| K text was too big and it was short |
| #4 Some_God[140861] |
| ool-18bc02b8.dyn.optonline.net |
The different nuts at the end were funny =]
Cheers,
~SG~ |
| #5 LurkerBurger7[140862] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
Well, writing is slowly improving in each Report. Problems such as the tense of the writing and frequent use of the same word (namely-"good") are stinking up the whole report. I thought the writing was better in the first half then the second. The involvment of comps instead of humans lowered the excitement of the report.
5 |
| #6 LurkerBurger7[140863] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| Yeah, I liked the assorted nuts at the end :) |
| #7 LameJoker[140865] |
| pool-129-44-15-232.alb.east.verizon.net |
| erm.... comp stomps = not cool |
| #8 Psyonic_Reaver[140868] |
| 0-1pool56-129.nas21.portland1.or.us.da.qwest.net |
If you know its too short...Dont post it. People dont like reading reports that dont hold their attension and dont BR any more games that include Comps.
Thanks.
Your writing is improving though. Keep going! You'll get there! Also, with the pics make sure they are consistent with the BR, I noticed your first pic was offset and I could see white behind it.
Keep working with the HTML until you get your desired effect. Dont give up! |
| #9 ~GangsterCookies~[140869] |
| pool-138-88-146-219.esr.east.verizon.net |
| 5 |
| #10 lowlymarine[140870] |
| user-0cej4e7.cable.mindspring.com |
| Not bad, but not great, either. Still, it was OK, 5.5. |
| #11 the-nut[140871] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
Thanks Psyonic_Reaver =)
Thanks lowlymarine :)
Thanks Some_God :P
The assorted nuts! |
| #12 the-nut[140872] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| I'm trying to put my best 11-year-old effort into it Psyonic_Reaver =] |
| #13 EldritchEvil[140873] |
| nr11-216-196-191-222.fuse.net |
Ehhh. Try to find a better game sometime, or if you can't, DL a replay of top players and BR it. The color scheme was OK, the text was way too big and it was too short. The layout was OK, and the screenshots were OK. Put more effort into it, find a better game and improve your english, and I see golds in your future.
5 |
| #14 knightLight[140874] |
| weld-ext.nt.tas.gov.au |
| The-nut, (aka snip3r) PLZ take more time writing and reviewing ur reports before u submit them... dont just try and get ur b.r done as quick as possible. If u do follow my advice i can guarentee ur ratings will rise |
| #15 the-nut[140876] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
thanks EldritchEvil
i'll try to find a better game |
| #16 Avail[140877] |
| c-24-30-250-7.va.client2.attbi.com |
| Any game that involves the bashing of computer-controlled players deserves to burn =[ |
| #17 the-nut[140896] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| ^_^ |
| #18 Ebenol[140904] |
| h25n1fls22o997.telia.com |
Why is there a white outline around your text? It looks bad..
|
| #19 Manius[140929] |
| ga-cmng-cuda2-c5b-80.atlaga.adelphia.net |
| You people and your damned text. It's always either too big or too small, isn't it? ;] I'm just poking fun, no one flame me plz k thx. |
| #20 the-nut[140938] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| i jus brroke my pinky ;( |
| #21 Augury[140939] |
| rh141-48.resnet.ucsd.edu |
#19 Ebenol:
Actually, it seems that way the html is formatted in submitting the report causes a while outline to go around the entire report. Since the final code's <body> tag has everything in it deleted and replaced simply by <body>, the outlining around the <table> tag remains the default color - white. I think the only way around this is to link to your actual report page like how zerg~ling and dialtone have done with their most recent reports. |
| #22 iNsOm[140947] |
| evrtwa1-ar13-4-62-071-166.evrtwa1.dsl-verizon.net |
| you're going to have to report better games, comp stomps aren't going to cut it. |
| #23 [140991] |
| h25n1fls22o997.telia.com |
#22,
I meant in the images. There is a white outline around the text. |
| #24 i hate this report[141021] |
| dorset-ext.nt.tas.gov.au |
| 2.0, if u EVER get gold for writing crap like this, ... omg i dont know what id do. |
| #25 the-nut[141031] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
i'm srry about teh comp thing
i was looking for a game for weeks and couldnt find one
i understand the 5.0 |
| #26 Sabotage[141036] |
| pool-68-160-248-97.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| :p its time for me to br again. |
| #27 Chris[141159] |
| astound-64-85-237-118.ca.astound.net |
| I didn't read it. Thanks for telling us it has comps in the title so we can promptly give it a 1.0 |
| #28 TooMuchToHandle[142666] |
| cache-ntc-aa02.proxy.aol.com |
| Well, it probally would have been a kewl br cept for the fact that it had comps. Make br off good high quality games. ;) |
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