| #1 Ebenol[140922] |
| h25n1fls22o997.telia.com |
Wee.
My second (and third?) report. |
| #2 [140924] |
| mnet-baca244-13-199.monarch.net |
i liked this. there were some mistakes(bad grammar and pics covering text), and you could use with a little more description (soandso attacked and failed, then attacked and destroyed the expo doesnt make for the most thrilling report). however, this was an enjoyable and quick report, although the pic style for the second game was not very good.
personally i hate numerical ratings, but i think this is about a 7.5
oh, and 1st non-author |
| #3 third[140925] |
| 80.232.242.19 |
| third |
| #4 LurkerBurger7[140926] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
cool
7.3 |
| #5 lowlymarine[140927] |
| user-0cej4e7.cable.mindspring.com |
Not bad. A little one-sided, but hey, sometimes that's just the way things are. Overall, very nice, if somewhat bland. No alt either. Still, GJ!
6-7 |
| #6 ZerG~LinG[140932] |
| p421-090.ppp.get2net.dk |
Right.
I'll just make a list:
-You against Nazgul? Right?
-Ridiculously short descriptions
-Quite sucky writing overall
-Graphics sucked.
-Stupid (ASFGAF MAPHACK!!!) comments
-Was impossible to actually make anything sensible of the games.
-Gr4mMar?
Gods, 5 |
| #7 Cpt.Chronic[140953] |
| 65.89.38.242 |
Pros:
I've seen worse
Cons:
see #6, plus you had no flow. I only read the first one, but before I knew it, you were being pushed out of your base and then won with bcs with no description of wtf's going on- really hard to follow. [newbie]How do you kill someone's natural and main and still manage to lose?[/newbie] |
| #8 ~GangsterCookies~[140963] |
| pool-138-88-150-96.esr.east.verizon.net |
| not too great but better tahn last time lol |
| #9 LameJoker[140968] |
| pool-141-149-27-19.alb.east.verizon.net |
| fastest = gay |
| #10 Ebenol[140990] |
| h25n1fls22o997.telia.com |
#6,
You're criticizing me for my opponents nick? Right?
Am I supposed to call him Nazi? Gullie? What? I can't really call him anything but his nick. So I can't BR a game where some guy I'm playing against has the same nick as a famous gamer?
Quite some constructive criticism. |
| #11 ZeaL[141033] |
| proxy.ia3.marketscore.com |
wohoo, go napolic and ebenol, some actually brs. go go.
-;- shoot me plz. |
| #12 Avail[141034] |
| c-24-30-250-7.va.client2.attbi.com |
What Ling said.. and you have some great photoshop software, but you really screwed some of the pics up...
5-5.5 |
| #13 the-nut[141035] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
The TV/Cube was creative but the writing isnt that good. (Mine isnt that good either ^_^)
-Creative
6.5 |
| #14 Smeagol[141045] |
| nile-ext.nt.tas.gov.au |
it was okay but u deserved a 6. ling's being a bit hard on u it was pretty decent for ur 2 (or 3rd?)
keep writing u'll get better. |
#15 [141130] |
| p437-032.ppp.get2net.dk |
#10: I thought you meant the well-known sc player by the name of Nazgul, who is in fact, quite good. I found it doubtful you played against him, sorry about that.
I still stand by my 5 though.
(hope this fuxing tag works -.-) |
| #16 <img "users/ZerG~LinG/tag.gif">[141131] |
| p437-032.ppp.get2net.dk |
| Jesus |
| #17 <img "users/ZerG~LinG/tag.gif">[141132] |
| p437-032.ppp.get2net.dk |
| Sorry about spam -_- |
| #18 Napoleic[141138] |
| h24-82-62-176.vs.shawcable.net |
| Ebenol you cant put the guys name down as Nazgul and say nothing about it and expect no one to comment on it. If its not the pro nazgul then make it very clear. |
| #19 Chris[141320] |
| astound-64-85-237-118.ca.astound.net |
Alright.
This deserves 6.0
Not quite gold but getting there, quickly.
Nice report, but could've used a bit more spacing between text.
A little dry on the commentary. Good job. |