| #1 EMS[141183] |
| 143.229.73.112 |
looked ok at first glance, but none of your pics worked, sorry dude,
EMS |
| #2 MaFiA[141184] |
| modemcable081.11-130-66.mtl.mc.videotron.ca |
| yep , non of the pics work |
| #3 Convider[141185] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3660426.sympatico.ca |
| it would be MUCH better if you had pics, but I could get by using your writing =/ |
| #4 EAT-AT-JOES[141187] |
| 12-210-218-18.client.attbi.com |
| In case your interested, one of my nicknames is "Dan Blather" |
| #5 EAT-AT-JOES[141188] |
| 12-210-218-18.client.attbi.com |
| THE TRUTH IS OUT THERE |
| #6 EAT-AT-JOES[141189] |
| 12-210-218-18.client.attbi.com |
OR IS IT
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| #7 EAT-AT-JOES[141190] |
| 12-210-218-18.client.attbi.com |
I THINK IT IS
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| #8 EAT-AT-JOES[141191] |
| 12-210-218-18.client.attbi.com |
NO IT IS NOT
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| #9 EAT-AT-JOES[141192] |
| 12-210-218-18.client.attbi.com |
| OR IS IT??? |
| #10 EAT-AT-JOES[141193] |
| 12-210-218-18.client.attbi.com |
| AHAHAHA!!! |
| #11 endersshadow[141196] |
| ool-182d2de6.dyn.optonline.net |
not a bad first attempt, although you may want to change background color as many readers are highly critical of white backgrounds :p
(for background)
<table>
<tr>
<td bgcolor="(insert color)">
and if your background is black,
change your font to white in order to be able to read it:
<font color="(insert color)">
overall not a bad report, just work a little with resizing font (the end was very ugly, no offense) and get your pictures to work. I would say 5, possible**** 7 if pics had worked. |
| #12 Convider[141199] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3660426.sympatico.ca |
okay, if you try to view the pics directly, they're unviewable because they contain errors. Maybe you forgot to convert it to .jpg or maybe it was saved as a .gif and you uploaded it as a .jpg.
but i dunno.
hmm... don't think that the report is unfixable tho. just fix the images but keep the location, and they should work.
5 |
#13 [141213] |
| p416-072.ppp.get2net.dk |
Like others said, pics didn't work, but seriously how many times have we seen probes tanks and zealots duking it out :p
(Still it would have added some to the overall score)
Text was fairly average and game was hardly the best ever, although I think you could have exploited the last minutes of base busting and probe running a bit more. I almost skipped it because the start-up was so long.
Think a mere "Gogita was going for zealots and robotics blah blah" could have covered the first couple of paragraphs in a more entertaining way.
Search for 9's and 10's and get to reading, best way to learn.
5 |
| #14 JakobderLudner[141226] |
| 24-205-51-132.gln-eres.charterpipeline.net |
| Whoa, thanks for the comments guys. I know the end was kinda ugly, but oh well. I'll be coming back for a second report soon, since I have about three battles written down on paper and are just waiting to be reported. As for the pictures, well, I'll try and see what I can do about it. |
| #15 JakobderLudner[141228] |
| 24-205-51-132.gln-eres.charterpipeline.net |
| Ok, fixed the images, but some of them look extremely ugly. Oh well. Next report then. |
| #16 {DD}Fatboy[141230] |
| adsl-64-171-188-216.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| Hey, looks good, a lot better than some that I churned out over 3 years ago, and mine got golds. Just comes to show how much the standards have improved with time. |
| #17 Imrahil[141304] |
| 1Cust5.tnt2.virginia.mn.da.uu.net |
| Two of the pictures still didn't work. That's ok, though, because I didn't need them to know how the game is going. The grammar and font size could be reworked, as stated. Good read, though, and I know your next report will be better. I look forward to it. |
| #18 LordSion[141743] |
| 138.227.189.9 |
smaller font plz
Not bad for a first report. Better use with background and textcolour. 2 pics didn't work 'the cannons...' and '...my base...' sumthing.
Good to report a battle you loose. Nice move, agree.
Well fatty when you talk about standards at new br are you including thenuts??? he still have some way to go :o) Although it seems Lurkerburg is really improving.
nm just a mental note |
| #19 killkenny11[147818] |
| roc-24-24-50-73.rochester.rr.com |
more pics dude
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