| #1 John Ckawsoki[141460] |
| adsl-67-117-148-194.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| 1st! |
| #2 JakobderLudner[141461] |
| 24-205-51-132.gln-eres.charterpipeline.net |
Hope you guys enjoy this br, but I kinda left a some stuff out that I just now found in my notes (mostly the conversations because it's been so long). But I have all the major stuff in there.
Maybe I could rewrite it in the future, but right now I'm satisfied with the thing |
| #3 http://maddox.xmission.com/matrix2.html[141462] |
| ACA09FC3.ipt.aol.com |
not that long. good.
6 |
| #4 EAT-AT-JOES[141465] |
| 28.san-francisco-45-50rs.ca.dial-access.att.net |
pretty good.
7 |
| #5 Timid[141466] |
| adsl-64-166-210-133.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
| Hey, not bad |
| #6 Ebenol[141471] |
| h47n3fls22o997.telia.com |
| The text is a bit dark at times, but the rest is great. |
| #7 YourMumsBrother[141472] |
| 123.c.002.hob.iprimus.net.au |
great report 7.8, deserves gold.
only complaint was that it was on StarCraft. Make it on warcraft 3 next
time ya? ok thx |
| #8 Some_God[141477] |
| ool-18b8c59f.dyn.optonline.net |
NO DONT MAKE IT WC3 ... SC is the only thing we havbe left of our past! = þ
Cheers,
~SG~ |
| #9 LurkerBurger7[141482] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
solid report. a few things...
1. pics were ok, but could definitely improve
2. writing was mediocre
3. a tad short
Overall-nice report 6.5
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| #10 BlueRibbon[141484] |
| 65.167.45.26 |
I enjoyed it.
6.5-7 |
| #11 [141487] |
| mnet-baca244-13-199.monarch.net |
solid, enjoyable and a nice turnaround in the end. the on ething was the text on pics looked REALLY bad in some places, did you draw the text in? one final thing is that no alt text = no thx.
7 imo |
| #12 JakobderLudner[141489] |
| 24-205-51-132.gln-eres.charterpipeline.net |
| Sorry about alt text. It was one of the things I said I left out. I thought about lots of possible things to put in there but I forgot to add them in. -_-;; oh well. My first report has some pretty funny quotes in the alternate texts though. |
| #13 Psyonic_Reaver[141490] |
| 0-1pool57-153.nas21.portland1.or.us.da.qwest.net |
What a VERY satisfying report. Makes me want to play a game of SC right now. (Fact, I think I will)
Your writing style was very well done for a first timer. There were some spelling errors and grammer mistakes but thats common.
Your pictures on the other hand...You had too many. While they did show lots of information you dont always need them. If you can describe a picture in 1 or 2 sentances then do it. But hey sometimes you need all those pics 'eh? Also, make sure you add borders to your pics. Pics without borders just float around and they get lost. So remember borders next time!
The game was pretty plain TvZ but you did good with what you had.
7.5 - 8 |
| #14 Corpus[141497] |
| 12.214.224.66 |
| Classy report GJ. |
| #15 bang my mother[141501] |
| cache-mtc-am06.proxy.aol.com |
| I though it was a gret report |
| #16 EldritchEvil[141502] |
| nr11-216-196-190-43.fuse.net |
Oooh, nice first report! It's good to see a new reporter hit the scene with a decent report instead of, in the case of LurkerBurger7, a terrible on first, moving on to mediocre and now decent. Or, god forbid, the-nut who is STILL trying to make a decent report, yet refuses to accept advise and criticism. I liked the length, short reports and often too laking in detail. The pictures were mediocre, but they did the job. You put effort into this, as is obvious as showcased by the color-coded names. The green-on-black didn't do much for me, but I couldn't detect any grammar or spelling errors. Your writing could use some humor, as I found it a teense boring, but again you show attention to detail. One other complaint is the length of some of the collages, try to break them up next time!
7.5 |
| #17 ZeaL[141505] |
| proxys.or4.marketscore.com |
Wow EE, that's too long to read.
Here's a short post
-crappy pics
-good writing
-gold (i think) |
| #18 EldritchEvil[141506] |
| nr11-216-196-190-43.fuse.net |
| "Too long to read" translates to, "I have too small an attention span to read tha- Look, something shiny!" |
| #19 [141509] |
| cascade-ext.nt.tas.gov.au |
| lol |
| #20 Sabotage[141512] |
| pool-68-160-248-97.ny325.east.verizon.net |
keep reporting
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| #21 Some_God[141517] |
| ool-18b8c59f.dyn.optonline.net |
EldritchEvil, what do you have against people working thier way up to making decent reports? I worked my white ass hard (well not really) to be able to make the kind of BRs I make now.
Cheers,
~SG~ |
| #22 JakobderLudner[141542] |
| 24-205-51-132.gln-eres.charterpipeline.net |
| Whoa, thanks for the compliments and suggestions guys. I just found out I screwed up some more when going over the report, but oh well. Wonder why this isn't rated yet? Must be the raters are off somewhere this weekend. My crappier report got rated right away. |
#23  [141595] |
| p419-029.ppp.get2net.dk |
Sorry, been a bit busy lately and haven't got to rating, will do so now!
As you have no doubt noticed, I gave it a six. Your writing was somewhat uninteresting, and hardly encouraging continued reading. It seemed like you used a lot of the same words and phrases a lot, I think I caught the word Offensive 10+ times. Don't get me wrong here, you writing is word by word better than a lot of other 6's, but it just didn't do anything for me.
And one thing about the pics: You have a black BG, what you have this, giant red borders and giant red and green type looks very, very, very bad. Nuff said.
Please continue writing, hopefully with a little more humour or something else to make it stand out. |
| #24 Losion[141758] |
| 138.227.189.9 |
Nice
A bit dark text on dark BG makes it a pain to read with the sun blazing through the windows.
A very good second report keep writing as told before. |
| #25 iNsOm[141772] |
| evrtwa1-ar13-4-62-064-238.evrtwa1.dsl-verizon.net |
those pics sucked.
try saving the replay, and watching it over and over again, and then slowing it down and pausing it a lot during battles to try to get the best pics |
| #26 I_am_Nitros[141848] |
| vance001.net.gov.bc.ca |
I actually kind of liked the colour of the text, and it was a nice report.
So
Report valued at 7 + Zerg winning is an extra 3 to your score thus your final score is..
10. Congratulations. |
| #27 Sabotage (again)[141992] |
| user-uive918.dsl.mindspring.com |
okay now that i read it i can truly comment:
-when you said BLOOD or w/e that was a little ugly. THe
pictures were a little lopsided. Try to compact the action in
good pictures.
-Your writing was very good vocab, i can tell you worked hard on it, but in some areas i got bored and turned off. Try to make the game flow. And also i kept forgetting where the zerg player had his main.
-One last thing, try to add minimaps. Minimaps=sex |
| #28 LOL[142102] |
| 205.154.27.250 |
| LOL LURKERBURGER TELLING PEOPLE THEY'RE MEDIOCORE AHAHHAHHAHA |
| #29 LordJimbo2[142912] |
| uucc1-pub.dttus.com |
That terran was a chobufuxoring joke. How long did it take him to build a tank? Did he even build a tank? Terran infantry is a joke and the late-game uselessness of it is the primary reason Terrans are worse than the other two races (that and the glacial pace of Terran heavy units - would it kill Blizzard to give Cruisers more range and speed, and make Yamato gun fast enough to kill an arbiter? Anyway, I digress.)
Good report - nice back and forth, although it kinda goes from "Terran has Zerg blocked off" to "Zerg wins holy shit!" in a paragraph. Next time, try and capture some of the tactical blunders better, and describe unit micro (surely there must have been some!) Again, good first effort. 7.
LordJimbo
"Lessons Learned
Game 1: Z>P Protoss sucks.
Game 2: Z<P Zerg sucks.
Game 3: P>T Terran sucks.
Game 4: T>T Terran still sucks." |
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