| #1 Keanu_Reaver[143961] |
| ip68-99-86-96.ph.ph.cox.net |
| Ok same thing as the last one, but so you know, I may or may not be posting the third chapter two weeks from now as I might be doing a br...if I can find a game good enough to br. :O Maybe an 88) clan war. Oh well, enjoy the read, criticism is cool too. |
| #2 FoodTastesGood[143962] |
| pm738-28.dialip.mich.net |
| #2 time to read |
| #3 FoodTastesGood[143963] |
| pm738-28.dialip.mich.net |
| Got done reading it and it is quite interesting like the first chapter. Can't wait till the next one. |
| #4 Slotham[143964] |
| euryale.its.adfa.edu.au |
| I like. Good descriptions and it leaves you wanting more. It's following a similar plot to 'The Lord of the Rings' but it is still very good. Write more! |
| #5 Keanu_Reaver[143965] |
| ip68-99-86-96.ph.ph.cox.net |
| its a bit like lotr, but it wont be for too long |
| #6 LurkerBurger7[143967] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| 6th =0 |
| #7 Drunken)Goose[143970] |
| dsc01-dav-oh-1-215.rasserver.net |
Quality writing... Å„
Interesting material... Å„
Topical dynamic... Å„
Battlereport with at least one of the above traits... pending :/
Score: madwuv@keanu |
| #8 Drunken)Goose[143971] |
| dsc01-dav-oh-1-215.rasserver.net |
| Daggummit. Just mentally replace the nonsense with a check symbol. |
| #9 LameJoker[143972] |
| pool-129-44-10-96.alb.east.verizon.net |
| much better than the first. keep writing plz. |
| #10 Convider[143974] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3660758.sympatico.ca |
:o
nice... some minor grammtical/spelling errors but thats about it |
| #11 Some_God[143975] |
| ool-18b8c53e.dyn.optonline.net |
| Not a lot of comments ... hopefully this site will get back to normal. |
| #12 Zalbag[143977] |
| chi-tgn-gbz-vty11.as.wcom.net |
| very entertaining read. Only thing i noticed were a few spellinggrammatical errors but they didnt take away from the story at all. cant wait for the rest! |
| #13 Dopey[143983] |
| pr-122-042.ains.net.au |
| Yay for the BR :).. when it comes out. |
| #14 Decay[143989] |
| 66.44.173.94 |
#11, there are still plenty of people around who are reading everything that gets posted who just don't ever post (like me).
And nice read, Keanu, waiting for the next. ;) |
| #15 Some_God[143992] |
| ool-18b8c53e.dyn.optonline.net |
Thats good to know. =D
Peace,
~SG~ |
| #16 firestone[144005] |
| pm3-47.tekdata.net |
i liked alot but i still don't understand how a necromancer could suddenly turn all the towns people into undead and walk in and kill a great mage like that.
so the necromancer tryed to turn the one guy all undead did he and the mage saved him cool. |
| #17 Keanu_Reaver[144007] |
| ip68-99-86-96.ph.ph.cox.net |
| All will be explained in due time, understand that this story, while using some cliche'd mythical creatures, is not going to be following the usual cliches, most of what happens will be my own brain children. |
| #18 DoPeY HaMbOoGeR[144008] |
| asia316jy4bf.bc.hsia.telus.net |
| THAT JUS SUCKS SO DO ALL U NOOB ASS HOES gO SUck A LIL DICK gays!! |
| #19 Do{)EY[144009] |
| asia316jy4bf.bc.hsia.telus.net |
GA
YS |
#20  [144195] |
| Toronto-ppp272584.sympatico.ca |
sexy as always . . . 9.
hey Keanude want to play a 3v3 with me in the next few days that I br? I feel like doing one . . . whenever is good for you |
| #21 Keanu_Reaver[144203] |
| ip68-99-86-96.ph.ph.cox.net |
Ohhhh damn, sure I would dag, I got work today but tonight I'll be available.
Great to have you back too. <3 |
| #22 UnDeAdFeNiX[147960] |
| hlfx2-3397.ns.aliant.net |
| Dag yo, this be UnDeAdFeNiX[RS] yes i know rec on war3 is shit but shhh, anyways. I'd like to say this is VERY nice, and 2 firestone i'd like to point out we dunno if its a necro or not... Didnt say that... and if it did i was too pulled into the actual story. Great description. Write more man, you ownz. |
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