| #1 OverTheUnder[150687] |
| 12-216-178-164.client.mchsi.com |
| omg.... first COMMENT not by an author for a while^^. |
#2  [150688] |
| 128.171.66.89 |
Hmmm, I'm torn between a 7 and an 8 for this report.
I liked the most of the report and your description of what was happening, but the ending felt rushed and too picture-happy. I was waiting for the carriers as I read since it didn't feel like you were going to do something crazy. Also there were spelling and grammar errors sprinkled through the report.
I'd suggest additional proofreading (Yeah, its boring) and better cropping/picture selection in the later pictures.
I'll say 8 and make more reports. |
| #3 The-Nut[150689] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| 3rd! swell report indeed |
| #4 EMS[150690] |
| 150.108.236.21 |
Good report I laughed at this quote
(do you guys remember that AQD3 report where Mark4 thought referring to positions by the face of the clock was weird? GAWD! what a newb!).
Nice |
#5  [150691] |
| nr11-216-196-191-2.fuse.net |
I agree with WhosGotLag -- the ending was rushed and relied on the pictures to illustrate the battle. Your writing is good, so capitalize on that next time.
I, too, shall deposite a glorious seven out of ten upon this report. |
| #6 shuriken[150693] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
reminds me of a old sabotage report
gj man |
| #7 PeaceableGhost[150694] |
| adsl-68-73-207-139.dsl.sfldmi.ameritech.net |
| Actually, I thought the picture ending was a nice touch. The game was good as well, which is always a plus. 8-9 |
| #8 OverTheUnder[150696] |
| 12-216-178-164.client.mchsi.com |
| not bad;p 8:D there is one thing though........"but right now I would be playing BW intead of >>>writing about it like a total nerd<<<"........There i even pointed out the part that will make ppl here wanna kick your ass:D lol I personally thought it was funny but u should be afraid...very afraidO_O |
#9 
[150697] |
| 129.142.195.30.ip.tele2adsl.dk |
Man I love these WGT chronicles.
This felt like my own PvTs, except for the fact that you won :D
I kinda enjoyed the picture-heavy ending - you had some nice illustrative shots (interceptors from above, and unsieged tanks being surround in particular) which kept my interest very nicely, thoroughly enjoyed the report, hence the 8. |
| #10 Raider[150698] |
| pcp01551300pcs.11thav01.fl.comcast.net |
Thanks for the feedback guys. Glad to head some of you liked the slideshow ending. I was actually deliberating for a while whether or not I should do it since it deviated from text comes first policy that I try to stick to. Those who did not think it was all that hot, don't worry, good things are in store for you :)
OverTheUnder, :O let's just hope none of the people here are aliens like in that fanfic of Drefsab's. |
| #11 Raider[150699] |
| pcp01551300pcs.11thav01.fl.comcast.net |
| By the way, I love all the new raters. |
| #12 Desert Demon[150700] |
| 152-20-166-171.globals.uncw.edu |
The slideshow deal didn't work for me, but it wasn't bad...I guess I just enjoy reading your writing more ;D
Still, pretty good...7, IMO... |
| #13
[150702] |
| 129.142.195.30.ip.tele2adsl.dk |
| Having no less than three ratings in less than 24 hours. Hello! |
| #14 Raider[150703] |
| pcp01551300pcs.11thav01.fl.comcast.net |
| haha yeah, that hasn't happened for at least two years now, if I remember correctly. Looks like this site is well on the way back up, and I am rather happy about that since it was the reports on this site that were mostly reposnsible for my addiction to BW. |
#15  [150704] |
| ip68-230-2-63.ph.ph.cox.net |
writing - i really liked the little strategy addendums you had when you discussed why you were doing what you were doing, but the grammatical errors did become fairly frustrating. also, i dont think you had a single comment in the entire thing about upgrades, so i really began wondering if you both were just sitting at 0/0/0 or 0/0 the whole time, if that is the case, it might help to mention that. you did mention alot about the naturals and expansions, so i didn't have much trouble at all knowing who controlled what exps, but again, the carriers just came out of the blue, its a good idea to surprise your opponent with carriers, its a bad idea to surprise your reader with carriers, especially considering the strategical depth you seemed to be putting in your report. otherwise, i thought you had pretty strong writing. 7
images - loved them in the beginning, hated them at the end. dont let pictures tell the story, let your writing do that, and i think your writing is good enough (with some proof reading) to do that job just fine. 7
game - sounds like it was pretty good, had some drops and harass etc. nothing spectacular but good enough for a 7
overall - 7, to be honest...20 minutes of extra work would have given you an 8 in my book, but its good enough for gold. |
| #16 TwistedNecro[150711] |
| lsanca1-ar54-4-3-202-139.lsanca1.dsl-verizon.net |
| In other words, writing=good, pic ending=not so good. Personally I liked it, but whateva, you people are too normal. ;-D |
| #17 [150712] |
| ip68-230-2-63.ph.ph.cox.net |
| i was split on the writing actually, on one hand i really liked it and enjoyed reading it, on the other hand it had glaring errors and things i couldn't ignore. love hate relationship |
| #18 LameJoker[150713] |
| pool-141-149-14-132.alb.east.verizon.net |
| gj gj gj. |
#19  [150714] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
| I like the report, most particularly the format. I agree with Keanu on the writing, however unlike him my overall opinion of it was largely favourable. The pics were oldschool enough to garner some nostalgia. Have an 8, and keep reporting! |
| #20 TwistedNecro[150718] |
| lsanca1-ar54-4-3-202-139.lsanca1.dsl-verizon.net |
| lol, He's got 8-7-8-7-8 |
| #21 Dibbler[150765] |
| 194.151.4.99 |
Quote: "do you guys remember that AQD3 report where Mark4 thought referring to positions by the face of the clock was weird? GAWD! what a newb"
Mark has a digital watch.... |
| #22 Dibbler[150768] |
| 194.151.4.99 |
| Splendid writing in this report. It actually didn't need any pics to follow all the pics. And the little strategic insight made it a learning experience as well. Tnx for the read. |
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