#1  [154481] |
| ip68-230-2-63.ph.ph.cox.net |
| ok, the first of the new chapters (ahem, raters), enjoy everyone, new chapter will be posted next sunday! |
| #2 Desert Demon[154483] |
| user-0ce2krl.cable.mindspring.com |
First non author ^_^
Will read when I can actually focus. Soo tired. |
| #3 .Praetor[154484] |
| c-67-172-163-127.client.comcast.net |
| First you write chatpers 1 & 2. Now chapter 4? heh :). |
| #4 [154485] |
| ip68-230-2-63.ph.ph.cox.net |
hey, i said in the other comment section the other post was chapters 2 and 3
i wasn't with it yesterday |
| #5 wakiki[154488] |
| cable-68-186-201-180.mtv.al.charter.com |
--”as if it was a great and miraculous feet to even so much as become aware”
Hehe, a little typo here. “Feat” should be there instead of “feet.”
They seem to be getting better and better. As you can see, I have fewer and fewer complaints. |
| #6 [154489] |
| ip68-230-2-63.ph.ph.cox.net |
| they are riddled with typos heh, like i said (i think) anything i post here is going to be one of the first drafts |
| #7 .Praetor[154493] |
| c-67-172-163-127.client.comcast.net |
| Obviously I'm a little slow... |
| #8 maareek[154494] |
| 150.176.83.30 |
You like to play brood war on "fast" speed, need I say more? ;)
I would like to know whether my immense lag helps or harms you in an ffa. |
#9  [154495] |
| d141-165-127.home.cgocable.net |
Why go through the beast, when you can go around it?
( Looks good so far ;] ) |
| #10 wakiki[154496] |
| cable-68-186-201-180.mtv.al.charter.com |
| Actually, no, they aren't riddled with typos ;) That's the first one I've found in the whole thing. |
| #11 [154498] |
| ip68-230-2-63.ph.ph.cox.net |
| well i should say riddled with things i intend to change :P |
| #12 eyje[154506] |
| ca-buenaprk-cuda2-c2a-a-49.anhmca.adelphia.net |
| it sucks |
| #13 Iamgay[154507] |
| ca-buenaprk-cuda2-c2a-a-49.anhmca.adelphia.net |
| well i think it is great and interseting |
| #14 some lurker[154517] |
| CPE00a065cb0ceb-CM014100005949.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| Interesting #12, #13, I like how you have the same IPs. |
| #15 wakiki[154518] |
| cable-68-186-201-180.mtv.al.charter.com |
| Hahaha good one :) |
| #16 0932a;sdlfjkl;[154522] |
| CPE00508d5bb46b-CM00e06f16610c.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
oh god write dialogue or write narrative
expository drivel interspersed with dialogue
0a98dsf98j4;l3jtk |
| #17 0932a;sdlfjkl;[154733] |
| CPE00508d5bb46b-CM00e06f16610c.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| Al-Wala'u wa Al-Bara' |
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