| #1 jsl[155756] |
| 211.212.197.97 |
never thought i'd do this but...
First..
now to finish this |
| #2 badme[155757] |
| pcp05313686pcs.norstn01.pa.comcast.net |
| 2nd. Gotta start at the beginning, though. |
| #3 Convider[155758] |
| HSE-Toronto-ppp304600.sympatico.ca |
Finished reading it, amazing, as usual.
You should really try to get the whole thing published...
10 |
| #4 SnK-Arcbound[155760] |
| evrtwa1-ar11-4.14.88.79.evrtwa1.dsl-verizon.net |
| 4th... uummmm... need to read it? Be uber t3ch guys. |
| #5 Some_God[155763] |
| ool-18b8c5a0.dyn.optonline.net |
| Damn... I need to read from the start because I forgot everything. :( |
| #6 Decay[155764] |
| 66.44.173.34 |
| Yeah, that's what I'm doing too SG. So long, but sooooo good... |
| #7 SupeRc0pKr[155765] |
| cache-rtc-aa01.proxy.aol.com |
dude my name's not that bad
but thanks for the front page item mark
also thanks to everyone who has read |
#8  [155767] |
| c-67-180-207-56.client.comcast.net |
| It's very 1337. I mean, honestly, your name conjures images of a 12 year old wigger in the suburbs, and your writing conjures images of a serious student of history who served a tour in the trenches. It's completely not what you'd expect =]. |
| #9 Dibbler[155770] |
| 194.151.4.99 |
Best story I've read on this site ever. It's great so see how you build your characters and give them a face and identity.
10! |
#10  [155771] |
| d141-165-127.home.cgocable.net |
| Nice story, yet you might want to work on cleaning up your writing - it's quite cluttered and there are plenty of unnecessary words. That said, it also displays flashes of relative brilliance. On the whole, great job - 8. |
| #11 Spike[155775] |
| CPE00a065cb0ceb-CM014100005949.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| I still haven't read most of the rest of the series, but what I did read was pretty damn good. |
| #12 Sven[155786] |
| p675gos51.rit.edu |
| He writes about 80 times better than you, Dag. Know your place. |
| #13 [155787] |
| d141-165-127.home.cgocable.net |
| know you're banned. |
| #14 so sue me[155791] |
| 209-180-30-2.mpls.qwest.net |
| F-words during WWII? News to me.. |
| #15 SupeRc0pKr[155792] |
| cache-mtc-aa01.proxy.aol.com |
what
when do you think the word "fuck" was coined
characters used it profusely in Puzo's "The Godfather," set in 1948 |
| #16 Decay[155793] |
| 66.44.173.31 |
"The language was foul. These nineteen and twenty year old men, free from the restraints of home and culture, thrown together into and all male society, coming from all over America, used words as one form of bonding.The one most commonly used, by far, was the f-word. It substituted for adjectives, nouns, and verbs. It was used, for example to describe the cooks: 'those f---ers,' or 'f---ing cooks'; what they did: 'f---ed it up again'; and what they produced.. David Kenyon Webster, a Harvard English major, confessed that he found it difficult to adjust to the 'vile, monotonous, and unimaginative language.' The language made these boys turning into men feel tough and, more important, insiders, members of a group. Even Webster got used to it."
-Stephen E. Ambrose, Band of Brothers
Sorry super, still haven't finished this. :( Still going though. |
| #17 SupeRc0pKr[155795] |
| cache-rtc-aa01.proxy.aol.com |
| haha take your time |
| #18 Simply_Eugene[155934] |
| pool-138-88-155-180.esr.east.verizon.net |
| Totally awesome. I'm going to go save each part of the story on my harddrive - I found this last chapter especially touching. I'd like to thank you for putting so much of your time and effort into writting this. Probably one of my favorite, if not my favorite of any kind story I've found online. Pity it had to end like this, but I suppose it's fitting that it ends on this tone. |
| #19 iNsOm[157153] |
| wbar11.sea1-4.31.70.123.sea1.dsl-verizon.net |
| this is not a starcraft battlereport...delete!! |
| #20 gizmogoof[157493] |
| px2cv.gv.shawcable.net |
| fuckin retarded gay report |
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