#1 [156444] |
| c-67-180-207-56.client.comcast.net |
| Aren't you old school enough to approve your own reports yet? HRT! |
#2 [156445] |
| c-67-180-207-56.client.comcast.net |
| and wow, fucked up story man. |
| #3 RubiksCube[156447] |
| mail.de.randstad.com |
| Awesome. |
#4 [156451] |
| nr11-216-196-190-194.fuse.net |
| you have a weird life. |
#5
[156454] |
| 83.72.192.168.ip.tele2adsl.dk |
This was amazing.
Very much like a few certain tarantino movies :D
I'm pondering whether to slap a 9 on this or just leave it as-is. Awesome story, either way. |
| #6 CynicalMagician[156455] |
| S01060003b0001986.vc.shawcable.net |
| eldritch - it's based on a real character (me), but that's where the nonfiction ends. none of htat really happened, thankfully. |
| #7 Desert Demon[156456] |
| user-0ce2kb0.cable.mindspring.com |
| 8th :D |
#8 [156457] |
| nr11-216-196-190-194.fuse.net |
| i dunno, dude, it just seems like it could've happened to you. |
| #9 Born)Slippy[156458] |
| www.capetowngolf.co.za |
| That was fucking hilarious, hahaha. Good job. |
| #10 iLostMyTemple[156460] |
| 24-168-28-239.si.rr.com |
| Incredible. |
| #11 PeaceableGhost[156463] |
| 198.109.221.15 |
| How about the Mario skills, those real or not? |
| #12 wakiki[156466] |
| cable-24-158-231-232.mtv.al.charter.com |
| Haha awesome :) |
| #13 Desert Demon[156467] |
| user-0ce2kb0.cable.mindspring.com |
| Man that was beautiful...*bookmark's Cyn's blog* |
| #14 DD[156468] |
| user-0ce2kb0.cable.mindspring.com |
| bookmarks* wtf I suck :[ |
| #15 CynicalMagician[156469] |
| klserver.mmat.ubc.ca |
the mario skills are totally real. it sucks tho because I don't own a cube myself. I haven't played in about 8 months (since I broke up with the gf who's roommate had a GC).
I'm glad people are liking it. it was fun to write. |
| #16 TheCheeseManCan[156471] |
| CPE000f3d63fc11-CM000f9f50cd74.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| Buying cocaine that some guy crapped out? That's hilarious! |
| #17 Convider[156473] |
| HSE-Toronto-ppp303701.sympatico.ca |
| vancouver!!!!! |
| #18 SuingForDamages[156477] |
| h0080c819e03c.ne.client2.attbi.com |
| Only Cynical can pull this kind of fiction and make it sound real. He's that cool. |
| #19 EMS[156499] |
| pcp08442226pcs.kirkav01.md.comcast.net |
DUde this fucking ROCKS. Excuse my profanity, but this was the best amature story I've seen in a LONG time.
Great job! I'd give it a 10 easy |
| #20 snowyday[156505] |
| 24.107.136.7.charter-stl.com |
That was inane prose at it's best. Get some kickass pictures and next time you'll get a 9.
Seriously though, pictures would kickass (we'll have someone Paint them). |
| #21 Raider[156508] |
| ip68-227-201-93.dc.dc.cox.net |
| Haha, awesome. Good writing. |
#22
[156525] |
| 83.72.192.168.ip.tele2adsl.dk |
Me and you, Super Mario Kart 64 - no contest. I think I must have played that game to perfection with a buddy of mine. Never tried out Double Dash (or any GC game for that matter -_-), but if it gets you into situations like this, well maybe i will :P
Added that 9 btw |
| #23 Nerf[156532] |
| c-24-12-218-16.client.comcast.net |
| awsome =) |
| #24 Fractal_Wave[156610] |
| d216-232-170-238.bchsia.telus.net |
Still the best pure *writer* ever to grace this website. 'Parabola Fish' is one of the greates pieces of fiction ever created by man.
All the best,
Fractal_Wave
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| #25 wakiki[156668] |
| cable-71-8-66-192.mtv.al.charter.com |
| I like Mario Kart 64 alot better than Double Dash. DD just feels slow and lethargic, for some reason. Maybe it's cause I started playing F-Zero GX, I dunno... |
| #26 Chris[156703] |
| astound-64-85-237-46.ca.astound.net |
| Only story on this site that I liked. |
| #27 Timid[156773] |
| cpe-24-30-184-75.socal.rr.com |
| This was great |
| #28 Resonate[156797] |
| basil.csd.plymouth.ac.uk |
as interesting as that was, it wasn't a BR
but who cares about that shit, good stuff <3 |
| #29 striz[157045] |
| CPE0007e95ea1fa-CM013050003852.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| nice job. |
#30 [157236] |
| c-67-176-104-160.client.comcast.net |
Why didn't I see your name earlier!
Funny writing, as usual. I completely agree with fractal_wave. You rock. |
| #31 Chaos[157353] |
| c-67-163-255-238.client.comcast.net |
Everything but the single tear thing was great.
No one sheds a single tear and no one ever sees a single tear. Ever. |
#32 [157677] |
| CPE000f3d01470a-CM00e06f16610c.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
man this was fucking awesome, i thought it was real too lol
" If the ancient Israelites played Double Dash, they'd forget about the golden calf and idolize me. If Double Dash were sexual prowess, I'd be banging two supermodels at once. On a rollercoaster. A rollercoaster of love."
sounds exciting |
#33 [157678] |
| CPE000f3d01470a-CM00e06f16610c.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| 10 btw |
#34 [158924] |
| CPE000ea6388836-CM001371143574.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
Nice story - not really my favourite genre but what can you do. Your diction is very good. I only noticed a couple mistakes - you should consider being a writer.
I would rate a 9 :] |