| #1 MidnightGladius[158471] |
| 221.226.136.17 |
Well, I hope this does better than that last...
For some odd reason, it won't space correctly...apostrophes take up way too much space and one part won't start a new header... |
| #2 Razoriel[158472] |
| CPE-141-168-28-249.nsw.bigpond.net.au |
| 1st non-author! |
| #3 MidnightGladius[158473] |
| 221.226.142.73 |
| Razoriel, at this point in time, that doesn't matter :D |
| #4 Timid[158474] |
| cpe-24-30-184-75.socal.res.rr.com |
| shoulda posted it all in 1 segment |
| #5 PeaceableGhost[158476] |
| 69.216.118.186 |
| You do at least write well, though I think I noticed some typos and such. 6-7-ish, I think. Interesting story - I seem to remember seeing it on SC.org, actually. |
| #6 casper...[158477] |
| CPE000f3d01470a-CM00e06f16610c.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| 10 |
| #7 Convider[158478] |
| HSE-Toronto-ppp304004.sympatico.ca |
Paragraphs, for the love of god!
The writing was okay, but the plot itself seemed pretty cliche...
5-6ish |
| #8 MidnightGladius[158479] |
| 221.226.136.11 |
PeacableGhost, where are there typos? I don't seem to see any.
Convider, the plot starts out like crap. You'll see the turnabouts later. Unfortunately, my MSWord computer is dead, so I can't post anything until it's fixed. |
| #9 MidnightGladius[158501] |
| 221.226.133.84 |
| Also, PeaceableGhost, I never posted it on SC.org... I was going to, but I didn't because I ran out of time. |
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