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#1 [166660] | | dblt-216-227-20-217.gtcom.net | I think I need help, too! I can't stop approving them!
Eventually I'm going to read all of these. I swear I am. | | #2 Feanor[166676] | | p54837D16.dip.t-dialin.net | Whehee, a[nother] GTA report. That's a second, isn't it? (I still don't know...)
Nice to read, well writen, good humor.
The quality of the images could be a bit better. I can remember the game looking that bad... (But maybe I'm just spoiled by playing the PC version with the Graphic Enhancement Pack: shaded water, reflections) ...and I feel as if you missed a few opportunities for cool pictures here and there. Also you are lacking those nice ideas you had for you images in the first episode.
I think maybe you should adjust your descriptions of the police numbers pursuing you a bit.
"Cops closed in from all directions, sirens wailed, ... , pursued by vans and cars loaded with law enforcement agents."
If it sounds like half an army now, how will you top that in later missions were you have more than two (or three) stars?
Oh, I nearly forgot, it was [again] a bit short for my taste...
I'd give this a 7 as well, 7.2 if there were tenth avalible. A good and solid report but nothing too mindblowing. Good work alltogether!
And yeah, I just copy/paste/modified my previous comment.
Lazy me :[ | #3 [166680] | | dblt-216-227-22-237.gtcom.net | Personally, I like reports that are solid, enjoyable things that are massive endeavors for either writer or reader. It's nice to have those huge reports every now and again, too, but I've never seen anything wrong with a reporter giving the readers a fairly constant dose of solid, if unremarkable, work. Gotta have something to read between the epics, you know.
I didn't like this one as much as the previous one. Most of the humor fell a little flat for me. Still enjoyed it, though.
Giving it a seven. |
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