| #1 .Praetor (cache1.cwo.com)[5431] |
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| Sorry about the strange short-line interruptions in some of the paragraphs. I copy over the text from Works, and none of the format follows, so I have to redo it. Then, the submit and view sizes are different, so I don't catch everything. Sorry about that. |
| #2 YourRoleModel (93.np2.np.dialup.nauticom.net)[5441] |
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| I like this story. My favorite part is when you describe the battles as seen from onscreen in the command center. |
| #3 MikeyMonty (dialup-209.246.73.21.NewYork2.Level3.net)[5456] |
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| Cool again. I love the description of the archon. How many parts are there going to be? |
| #4 bad_yellow28 (n154h038.thezone.net)[5460] |
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hehe i was wondering how you'd fix up that archon bit, and that was pretty damn cool.. =) i liked how the description didn't actually contradict the vagueness in the other chapter, because there it was from a distance or overhead view.. i can't remember.. the technique of seeing it from up close was great.. i would have never thought of a way to do that without contradicting the previous part.
in any case, this rocks, keep it up g.. =)
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| #5 .Praetor (cache1.cwo.com)[5464] |
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Hehe, bad yellow, I was a little worried when I read your comment on the last part. I thought, "Oh, shit. Talk about your mistakes, that's EXACTLY the thing I'm supposed to be avoiding." The archon bit in this part is totally thanks to you. Probably wouldn't even have noticed the last gaffe until I read the fourth over for the third time or so. (I have to read them all over when I want to do the next one).
YourRoleModel, thank you. Always nice to get compliments from master battlewriters like yourself and CattleBruiser.
And MikeyMonty, thanks. I have no idea how many parts there will be, but I'd say the battle is somewhere between one-third and one-half over. |
| #6 Entaro_Adun (galaxy.singnet.com.sg)[5655] |
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| That's 5 twelveth, you got 7 more to go, then. I'll wait patiently. I will read and copy&paste to MS~Word every single one. |
| #7 ¨THE BUDDIST MONK (jung.ti.telenor.net)[6235] |
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Sweet, I just love u're stories. Their GREAT, please keep them comming. Just an idea: add a short sum up off all the things that has happened so far, kinda like in starwars. It would be much easier to keep track of everything that has happened.
Keep up the good work man!!!!!
p.s please forgive anny spelling misteak's. |
| #8 .Praetor (cache1.cwo.com)[6305] |
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Hmmm, good point monk. I usually go back and read the last report I've written before starting another. No reason you guys should have better memories. On the other hand, the installments look great pasted together....
I'll probly keep them how they are =? |
| #9 Von_Doom (192.138.110.92)[7373] |
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OOOO another part of the story!!
Make a book out of it and I will buy it..
I heard that Blizz is going to sell Sc books and such,
U should apply for the job as writer.. heh.
U and YRM are the 2 I always look for if ya guys have
written something new.
Go ahead commander! |
| #10 .Praetor (port-sac39.cwo.com)[7523] |
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(checks around. Dang, it seems no one notices he obsessively checks his comments.)
yeah van Doom, I'd love that too! I've recently e-mailed blizzard to see how that SC books thing is going to work, since the main Phoenix Legion story is DEFINITELY going to be a full sized novel (70 pages or so with chapters 4 and 5). |
| #11 SuperGeneral (cr732571-a.pr1.on.wave.home.com)[8544] |
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The books I am looking forward to. That would be cool if Blizzard actually paid some attention to this site. Look back to #4 to check out my other comment...
Thanks a bunch
SuperGeneral
P.S. I wouldn't mind being a chracter in your story *wink wink* I don't care if you kill me or not it happens alot in the real game... |
| #12 Elendale[37736] |
| 205-213-43-161.sdlax.k12.wi.us |
Y'know, I vote .Praetor for most comment-checking guy. If you see this Prae, you can claim my vote :)
-Elendale (sneaky bastard...) |
#13  [40245] |
| fjwilson.reshall.ucsd.edu |
| Thanks Elendale, I'll take that vote. By the way, I saw your comment on the ScoutCraft report, I just didn't follow it up since it was just a strat blurb =). |
| #14 2e722[129819] |
| cache211.156ce.scvmaxonline.com.sg |
Wow. I'll cast that vote too, if you are indeed checking ur comments ^^
Peace |
| #15 .Praetor[148828] |
| dhcp53.des.ucdavis.edu |
| Nothing gets past me... |
| #16 maareek[153231] |
| mblt-ab026.gtcom.net |
*ahem*The only way you could be the most comment-checking guy is if you have more comments than me and...oh wait, nevermind. Beat me at yet another thing eh?
Another great part, especially enjoyed the visualization of the archon. I won't say I would never have thought of it, but it was nicely done anyway you like at it :). |
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